delete due to cringeness

LV 3

Carciphones_02

writing quality: 3 star story development: 5 star character design: 5 star updating stability: 2 star world background: 5 star as usual, my writing is not bad, but it's not perfect either. I kind off like it. the development and character design is pretty good so far. the updating stability is meh... but I will not abandon it unless I die. world background is yay! new novel. BTW.. I draw the cover and edited it myself. praise me.

LV 2

DaFatDuckyWriter

I love the book so far. Please continue writing it. I love the book so far. Please continue writing it. I love the book so far. Please continue writing it. I love the book so far. Please continue writing it.

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

This is a novel which is for 18 up. No children allowed, Keep it out of children's reach. But ey! This is exciting! Too bad she chose the masochist system, The tables will turn around if she chose the other one. Which made the novel interesting and I became perverted. Did I say perverted? no, Not really.

LV 1

LeoAsimp_co

The story so far is intresring i get the rivalry thing its very rated R which im bot complaining about. Try to make Your sentences Flow more, be discriptive of your mc’s thoughts almost like your in their shoes(if that makes sense) Keep it up its really good also love the cover btw. -dede