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"Xuan Yi was transported into the fictional world and became an elder of the Black Sword Sect! The moment he entered the world, he was at the Sea-Splitting Rank! He awakened his disciple accepting system. The more absurdly powerful his disciple, the stronger Xuan Yi would become! Others may depend on cultivation to raise their ranks, he raised his by accepting disciples! Although he was an elder, had anyone ever seen an elder whose strength was hundreds or even thousands of times higher than that of the sect leader?
""Little Girl, I noticed that your skeletal structure is astonishing indeed. You will be a prodigy in the Way of the Sword. Why don't you let me be your teacher? You can pick whatever saint-grade skills to learn. I also have ninth-grade elixirs for you to eat like snacks.""
""Ding. Congratulations to master for obtaining a disciple with potential over 9999. Rewards: a rank increase of ten levels, and three saint-grade skills!"""
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There's been a lot of system novels lately but novels where the Mc is taking in students are few and quite good I hope this won't dissapoint
It is a pity that this novel was ruined by the arrogant I have a plot armor so I do what I want sickness. The MC and his disciples ignore all rules and get away with it because they have the bigger fist. Example MC does not kill enemy Elder during a big event because that would be against the rules, but next second he helps his disciple to kill him in front of an exam venue full of people. The MC and his disciple might be justified, but they literally flaunt their ability go break the rules because they are stronger as often as they can. It makes no sense for the MC to hide inside a sect mountain and not look for disciples to increase his strength. He can see the talent of others. The entire origin story of the MC, or better the truly exciting parts of this story, get skipped and the novel starts with an OP MC taking in his 3rd and most brainless disciple. This could have been great, but it is just trash.
Cheap copy " I accept disciple and become stronger," when you read that novel will you know what I am talking about. I checked this novel is newer them that Author doesn't even change name of sect and main character! if read then read that you will be totally confused! Literally Copy Paste
no common sense in this s***y novel. you can go better spend time at pornhubcom there you can find better stories when this "p*rn". to lazy and to tired to write arguments 😴
World Building: Mentions a bunch of realms, higher than the otherwise highest introduced, randomly. Plot: Handsome strong MC everyone wants to be his disciple. Then they proceed to continuously pick fights with him/his disciple for the first 20 chapters. There must be some kind of widely spread brain illness in that world...
RAW NAME??? ....................................................................................................................................
A student kills a teacher, the head-boss comes over and is like 'Why they dead'. The mob is like ' Student bad, kill student'. Head-boss is like ' Ah this mob is too much' so decides to hold a battle royal, if Student wins they be free but if they lose, something happens.
Starts face-slapping left and right. Im fine with arrogant characters if they’re smart like scoring the sacred body mc. but this book is just painful
After reading this novel, I felt so motivated. It changed my whole life, now I'm a successfull person. I got 10 olympic gold medals, 6 Oscars. Next year I'm planning to buy moon. It's all happened because of this novel. Thank you so much, author-san🥰
Good concept and interesting story line that is ruined with brainless and very very arrogant mc/cultivation teacher actions. If you like cultivation novels, sects and teacher mc with system you may try it out. I am currently droping it after free chapters as I am not in a mood to read brainless arrogant mc actions. If the novel is chosen to translat for real I may try to read it later on but will not be unhapy if its not chosen either.
The translation feels super lazy, there are a ton of inconsistencies, especially the names of sects or moves, in one sentence, the name of a sect would be Paradise Palace, the immediate next sentence, they would change the name to Elysium Palace. This is not the only example, as this would happen all the time and is super immersion breaking. To be honest, I don't even mind the characters and the world being one dimensional as that is the case for 80% of the translated novels nowadays, but I can't even continue to read this due to having to constantly try to figure out what the translations are saying.
I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
this translation is utter garbage..... name of MC often changing, gender of MC often changing too from him to her from he to she, and not to mention the chapter. even if it is MTL at least give an effort to edit it. not recomended to spend to unlock the chapter..
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This honwstly sounds like it would E a good novel to read. Im just wondering when we still start to see chapters and how manY a day we will see?
The hero is stupid, the writer tries to show his patriotism, kindness and love for the world, stupidity.The hero is stupid, the writer tries to show his patriotism, kindness and love for the world, stupidity.The hero is stupid, the writer tries to show his patriotism, kindness and love for the world, stupidity.
Just a machine translation you will get mad after reading it. It will be good if it gets a better translation. Same cultivation levels are called in different names in different chapters, even the names of the same characters are different.
The story started okay. It was nothing special but it was enjoyable . The problem is the last 20-30 chapters are unreable . Its random glibberish and i would bet its raw MTL. I dont mind paying but not for that garbage.
My disappointment is immeasurable and my day has been ruined. Why tf they chose to translate this trash novel? ...............................
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