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摘要
Yamishi Yagami, a young talented student renowned for his intellect, runs into a Shinigami on his way home from school.
The Shinigami looks to Yamashi with a look of intrigue...
"Are you as bored as I am?"
"Yes"
Little does Yamashi know that this shinigami has just found his new Kira
*Warning: includes scenes with sex, torture and violence. You have been warned.*
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The books basically a dude finding the death note and doing what kira did, and it seems that they are related [i think]., plus its in the future, like 70 yrs..so yah interesting,,,,plus MC is apathetic and manipulative, like so far has done any major ****, just its what his personality seems like...but it suits the dude. Suggestion: make MC win, make him smart and show his intelligence, like moments where MC uses brain to crush and **** with his enemies would be dope, cause thats what kira is.. Maybe make him build a company to back him up and help him in his endeavors, like he can write in the death note, " [ the bad rich dude] will serve kira loyally for 30 yrs before death ", and that way he can find criminals easier,plus no one will know who the true ruler of the company is Add some romance and fluff but use it to keep MC sane or moral....in the sense, that MC finds a Love interest [ LI ] and as they progress she finds out about his ****, but becomes conflicted with staying with him..... cause she fears him and wants to leave, loves him and wants to stay? or some ****, but she decides to help and keeps him sane and moral, ....just build romance, dont make the chick a shallow *****, or some whore/mom or wife [enough dxd ****]....and dont make MC a rapist or man-whore.. anyway GL
The author of this book is really good at writing, his grammar use and spelling is also very good and you should be able to comprehend it very well also if any of you guys are death note fans then you should be reading this in sure you'll like it alot and so far its really good I love the concept and almost everything about it the only thing that could make this better is longer chapters besides that I think this is very good and we'll thought out so far.
Characters are dumb AF. MC has the IQ of a 9 year old. Author recycles all events. They happen exactly like in the original which is 70 years before the story. Also he recycles characters who are the exact same as those in the Anime/Manga. A pathetic attempt of a story. -1/5
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This is a great Death Note FF, the grammar is great unlike other FanFics out there. The Mc is like the OG Light Yagami and maybe even light himself, you gotta read to figure out the connection between the Mc and Light. This FF has a great psychological element where we get to take a deep dive into the Mc's brain and see his genius. It's a great read, trust me on this one.
First death note fan fic I’m reading so five stars also I wrote five instead of using the number five because I’m to lazy to change the thing to go to the number thing
A história é muito boa e envolvente, quando me dei conta já estava completamente imersa na leitura. O desenvolvimento do mc está sendo ótimo, e a misa está me deixando intrigada a cada parte em que ela aparece.
you have an excellent storyline even though it's has slight changes from original and some more rules is still fine reading this fanfic was actually pretty enjoyable so thank you 🌟⭐💫🌠
Well, It's readable but only a copy of the original with little changes. it's pretty much the same with little changes to details. not even the names of the characters are very different. Similarities are excused with bad explanations. I don't know why the author is bothering to write this he's not even earning anything with this.
I do like like the premise of it , just because of it is a fanfiction of death note , After I will look the and read the chapters more I am going to edit this review.
All I can say is read it. It is one of those good novels that's underrated. I highly recommend it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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As the Author must do, I have given myself 5 stars. This is only my second piece that I have written, therefore it's not exactly a work of art. That said, I do put a fair bit of effort into every chapter which is published. If you feel confused or like you don't like something in my story, just comment on the chapter and I will take what has been said and use it to better my own work in the future. I hope you enjoy your read.