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In an unknown land.. far from the scrutiny of knowing eyes... Death was rearing its head once again...
A young man on Earth had met with an untimely demise, his soul taken and tampered forced into a strange body on a different plane. He didn't know what he was or who he was.
Follow along his journey to unravel the mystery that is his existence, a man armed with Death and a System
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Grammar needs A LOT of work.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The basic info most readers need to know is that the mc is op, he has a system which allows him to level up in exchange for exp points and these points are earned through killing. I guess it's somewhat similar to 'Everyone else is a Returnee'. Even though english isn't the author's first language, the clarity and coherence of what I've read so far is pretty good, with only a few spelling mistakes.
MORE! I NEED MORE! I LOVE this book. I just read it all, catching up with the posts in one sitting. I'm addicted. I haven't felt this way for years about a book. The last time I got this feeling was my first wuxia novel, coiling dragon. Every book after just got more and more boring, repetitive. I've read 10s of thousands of chapters of this genre and it's getting old. This book though, I NEED MORE. Simple as that. Its exactly what I wanted in a book.
I enjoyed it till chapter 59 the aruptness of his state combined with some stupid out there bs with the "family" that appeared all I can say matter o' factly the story had me enthralled UNTIL the arupt gut punch with a whole load of plot armor and more probable than not a fiance or someone to duel cultivate with all i can say is not my cup of tea, but for those fine with such developments be my guest, also also, i was completely and utterly discusted by the brutal if not sickening rape of the su clan young miss by her first assigned partner/fiance. But other than all that good novel.
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Bon començament setas! El mateix del ultrafarm joc suposo xD Starts in a funny way and gives you the impression of a hard grind novel, personally I kinda like the system genre. It's a death god and it's already drinking blood xD Fucking ding! Fotali askeros!
I like the story so far, and I think that It has a great potential. I also like the many points of view that we have, we get to know the world around the main character a lot more. Looking forward to more chapters. Best wishes for more chapters and a great novel that we all can enjoy.
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 author why the update stability is getting worse day-by-day😢😢😢😢😢😢😢..........f*ck this 140 character's limit.......Still not enough
This story has fallen from top 20 to top 60 please improve the update rate otherwise Add some bonus chapters........this 140 characters limit ........**** it
I am rating it 3.2/5 because there are things that are major points in the story that aren't explained, first of all there's these random times where he start to go crazy and the system just knocks him unconscious for no explained reason, i also dont understand why he spends half of the first 7 chapters *****ing about the system, the thing that literally brought him back to life, i think the random stuff that happens that i think is meant to be funny, actually just take away from the quality of the story itself, like a 5 year old complaining that he cant get hard, i think that as a character who has meant to have a previous life and be 17, for some reason acts like a 5 year old and its like the author forgets he is meant to be 17 and goes hur hur its funny cause hes meant to be young and wont know this stuff when he is actually meant to be reincarnated
Great novel !! keep the good work. ........................................................................................................................
Hmmm 1.Great book 2.Great author 3.I want bonus chapters 4.i adore this book that is why this review exists filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun filler is fun
Great novel!! It will be top 1 one day ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is a great story, nice concept, alot of background (easy to understand the background story of MC). But i only recommend it if you can look past the grammar. Negligible mistakes are in the chapters, nothing too serious, but can irritate if you are particular about it.
This is probably one of the better original stories that is on this site, give it a try and you won't be disappointed. The main character is likable and it's equal parts action and funny. Good story telling as well with not many fillers. The author should release more chapters though. I can't get enough
Not much is out so far, but I must say that I'm loving this novel so far. Non-human (or technically non-human in this case) stories are few and far between, but I usually enjoy such things. My biggest problem with this novel is the constant spelling mistakes and poor grammar. However, that is basically a minor annoyance and I still enjoy this novel a great deal regardless of that, showing that the author is doing more than well enough with the concept to make up for it. My greatest problem with the story itself is the behavior of the characters, with sane people being prone to sudden huge mood swings, and the main character's occasional decent to madness feeling too sudden and very blunt, like getting hit in the head with a baseball bat when rounding a corner. Finally, due to the story not having progressed much and the length of the chapters, the author hasn't spent much time fleshing out the world itself to focus more on the main character and stuff happening in his immediate vicinity, which isn't a problem for me, but might be for others who wish to read this. In the end, I highly recommend this book for people who want a true Overlord of Death experience. The releases are fairly consistent, but each chapter is fairly short, so I'd say wait until a hundred or so chapters are out to pick this up.
A história é muito Boa, mas a taxa de postagem de capítulos e muito lenta na minha opinião, eu sei que todos tem seus problemas e afins na vida cotidiana, mas tentar uma postagem mais rápida e bom para a novel ..
good job author i like the story i hope you continue to update this novel -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Although it has system like other original novels (not that I'm complaining. I love systems and Op MCs). The Idea is a little different. The system not way too complicated that you can't understand it. (Some systems have way too complicated stuff that people can't understand if they have not played many games) I like the idea. The starting was great too. Instead of directly transmigrating with a body. Or reincarnating as a infant or in someone else's body which is common the author did something different. Hope you keep a constant release rate and don't drop the novel. My votes are yours.