/ Sci-fi / Death Defied
摘要
Man has sat and considered to themselves and others what exactly does the future hold in store?
The year is 2311, and the planet after the events of previous crises is now a wasteland. The rich and prosperous have retreated to the skies but, are still unable to pierce the cosmos due to era-defining war.
Ambitan, a young slum rat who lives within the dumps planetside, must struggle to survive, hopefully, reveal why the planet has become like this, and work towards a form of meaningful change.
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Hello all! This is CloakedInShadow here once more and I'll just be telling you how I'll try to update this as much as possible. I'm currently a student so expect some days where I will be unable to update. I apologize and thank you for what I hope is your understanding. Hope everyone here has a nice day.
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Not bad, Enjoying the beginning and hoping to love the rest of it as I go. I'm hoping to see How far this story goes. Your doing a great job author.
Pretty good for 4 chapters of work. Hope to see some more in the future so that I can understand the views of the characters betterer. I want to read more! Post more plz
Love the series of works from this author! Although I hope this one sticks around. If it’s like any of the authors past works, this story would surely be good
I've only read the first 6 chapters so far, and they are being churned out at really good pace. The characters feel a bit flat, but that allows room for character arcs and development. Excited to see where this would go!
In a typical fashion, I (the author) shall be leaving my newest work a 5-star rating. This is a work I'm genuinely passionate about, it doesn't follow the normal cliches and is inspired by a great discussion I had. I hope you guys stick around and see what I've got in store for you guys. I also hope to not let you down. Regardless, like my work or not all the best to you. If you could leave a comment of some sort to help inform of what I can improve on that would be great. I'm an aspiring writer and this is a way for me to get better. I also hope that my audience understands that I am but one person and I too am prone to making mistakes. Thank you very much for your time.