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I don't usually read these kind of books because I'm not into romance but this one was really good. I'm of the chapter 40 and I'm telling you right now this book is very immersive an emotionally stimulating. Definitely recommended!
Two chapters in and I'm hooked. This is well written and the main character almost immediatly grabbed me. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens.
An interesting story! The plot is intriguing. I like your FL, she is lost, and I hope she will find peace and happiness. From the beginning of the story, you try to describe the background world and give some answers to the reader. Well done!
Contemporary romance? No, not my cup of tea but this one is especially appealing because of the direct turn of the lines and the details of the author. The inner thoughts and reflections make it feel like you are living the story as you read the lines. I love this style of writing. I will continue to read this book.
I like how the synopsis captures my attention with a tinge of mystery in it. The Fl seems to be depressed and in trouble. Something most of today's youth is going through. Quiet relatable. Looking forward to reading more.
The quote of the book is a great tool to hook up the reader from the begining. The introduction and following chapter is straight to the point and enticing. There's a very limited range of vocabulary and it's repeated the same information two to three times. The vocabulary could be improved. The first scene doesn't feel very dramatic even with how serious It is affecting the character. There's no inmersion from the reader due to lack of setting in the scenario and, even more important, for the lack of sensations description or mention. It takes dramatism away. However, the transition to the room idea is good. An improvement would be a better description of places, to have a better idea of the context the narrator is in. The first chapter ends with an interesting concept ready to explore, making the reader engaged and wishing to read the next chapter! The enigma surronding the seeming owners of the house is really attractive in reading terms.
Good novel, definitely worth reading. Give it a try and have a good time reading ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Five stars and nth less, the first chapter alone is enough to make you want to keep reading and the characters are so real. The mc has very cute thought to 🥰i love this book and totally recommends.
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The pov in this book is blutunt(is that the correct spelling??) Which is a strong point. The expressions are vivid, however, it is fast paced. And I think you could write a little more smoothly....? Whatever, this book is already finished so meh. Cool work?!
in the beginning, i kind of confuse about the story. why would the man do save her? what is his intention. this question keeps bothering me that i read from one chapter to another. nice story, author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
does anyone know if there is a sequel? and is it needed? are there cliffhangers at the end of this book? please if anyone can answer. I prefer reading completed books, so would appreciate any answer... thanks
Wow... Amazing book, every page was interesting and amazing.... 🥰🥰🤗 In love with this stuf and realy happy because I read it... 👌🏼😁❤️❤️
This story i started reading as normal story as i was reading it got very interesting and to my surprise there different twists and thrilling characters and in the end it was sad which i doesn’t like it. Author the story development is good and very creative 👌🏻👌🏻👍🥰
I enjoyed reading this book, I'm at the 35th chapter right now...and the book it great. The author's writing style is quite unique, and I like that. Kudos author🤗🤗🤗🤗
I really loved this. It was hot, funny and sad. I also loved the incorporation of traditional elements. Like the names and some phrases. It was a good learning experience from me. Literary and and life in general. Keep up the good work.
Woah.... I'm speechless. I was just reading and reading until I got blocked. I was so zoned into the book, I was imagining everything happening like a movie. Such a good read![img=recommend]
I really love your story, from the description, to the mystery, to the use of words, everything, I'm really amazed. Wonderful story. Well done
I like how the book starts off with mystery, keeps the reader intrigued and yearning for more. The pacing of the story is quite good and the scenic descriptions draw the readers in, making them feel as if they are right beside the characters as their interactions take place. I can't wait to read more of this, I already want to know who the mysterious guy is. Great job author this book has the potential to be a success!
Very nice premise, very good story telling, characters monologue are very interesting and writing has subtly in it which adds increased immersion on the world. Definitely recommend