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After death, Devon is given the second chance he never wanted.
He decides to make the most out of his new life, exploring all that life in this new world has to offer, whether that be adventuring or soliciting elf girl prostitutes.
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I hope you don't have NTR hmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........................ hmmm hmmm hmmm
Even though it made me curious because of the smut scenes, what made me stay and enjoy this story are the high quality writing style and the fact that other than well written ero scenes, there is an actual story and background. The story seems interesting and unique. The background is interesting and really influences the way the Mc acts. If this doesn't get dropped by the author, it could become one of the best ero novels on webnovel!
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its only good because of the smut scene but the actual story is kinda trash and if youre masochist you might like it, and the god in here or the higher ups(e.g author) is a masochist, the mc wants to die and didnt want to reincarnate but because of the higher ups and he's an M he made the mc pseudo immortal but can still feel the pain and suffering for all time
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Both the story and the smut is amazing. Im honestly invested and I hope this novel goes on for quite some time. Im glad its daily instead of weekly updates.
Big meh. A smut story and that's it. Characters are fake af, world is ... idk stock fantasy world and additionally the update is really poor so 🤷♂️there's better stuff out there, start this if you have nothing else to do
Just one word - Amazing! I had always been searching for a good ero book, which are quite rare here and I finally found another one. I am impressed with how well structured and smooth the writing is. The English is very good as well, with no obvious grammar errors, which is very rare with original Ero books. The Ero scenes are also very good and can easily excite the reader. And it's not just going to the brothel and stuff, the 18+ scenes are diverse and very interesting. Plus, this story also has some plots focusing on non-erotic stuff and gives equal importance to the fantasy world's exploration. If the author keeps with the quality and release rate, this story is bound to a big hit. If you are someone who enjoys Ero books, what are you waiting for? Go read this now!
The first 22 Chapters show a surprising writing quality that is rather uncommon for ero-novels. And the good quality doesn't end with the writing quality, even the story and background seem to be well thought trough. I hope this develops into a great fantasy novel with lots ***-scenes in between the story. I hate novels where the Mc seemingly doesn't have any libido at all... Great work so far Mr. Author!!!
this story is sooooooooooooooòoooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooo fabulous like it a one in a milion I mean it kudos to d writer more ink to your pen love tag
Good novel, easy to understand bcs no complex details every arc/schene. keep it up..!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hey this is pretty good smut. I really recommend you if you're fan of this kind genre. love this.............................................
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balls to the wall, doesnt give 2 hoots protagonist. sees a sexy girl, he is going to have her come hell or high water. I'm really enjoying this series, but it's definitely not for everyone. if dub-con disturbs you then you're better off reading something else.
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It’s really good for an ero novel and as long as you’re not a snowflake you’ll most likely enjoy it. It’s plot is quite good and i mean both kind ;). Disclaimer if your a simp then it’s juts not for you, several instances of r**e and doesn’t seem like it’ll stop any time soon.
Im loving it so far keeping my interest peaked for what might come next even though the mc is in an another world he is have some tendency as for updated waiting forever is not ideal
This story is extremely well written, the smut scenes are short but sweet, and there seems to be a real focus on the plot which is uncommon for a ero-novel on this site. Although the chapters are short and the main character is a bit of a nihilist, I can already tell this book is going to be a good one.