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Awesome story have alot of potential . Keep up the good work bro and also continue make new chapters . please bro Keep it up.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
dude...sorry... first time I'll write a below 4 review... I thought it was a crossover of DC and Marvel(as in the title is really, really deceiving)... but quite the chapters in, apparently not. Quite a big thing for me since I really don't like how a genius supposed to be some characters in DC are but... somehow can't completely neutralize villains in order for them to stop causing harm again. Anyways... I could actually still read since typos in your work are not that horrible... but Just curious as to why random words are inserted in places they don't really fit in. You specified that the system is only for checking stats but the more I read, I don't think that was on your mind. Tho I could probably guess he's not a normal person.... but that should've been reflected on his stats even as a [???] or something similar. Even Batman has a suit. . . Not really bashing but just honestly giving my thoughts. Hope you improve more and still write.
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series a harem the story would develop much better without a. ........................ .m...................................... ...............
Amazing This is the best DC marvel fanfic i have seen . Please dont drop this Dhshzhhsgsgsgsgsgsggsgsvvvevegsgsgsvsvsbshzhzdjdnsbshzbwbakalalalajahshsbsgsgsgsgsgxhxgxhhhhhhgvvcdssa
Grammer is bad. MC is a slave to his system/God that reincarnated him. ******************************************************************