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This is a story about how a student of happy harbor high school was either onnthe wrong place at the wrong time or in the right place at the right time enjoy.
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an emerging story worth reading it's something different from the regular spiderman fANFIC I hope the writer doesn't stop writing and builds the story until it's a novelty worth reading it
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The pacing is terrible the story the feels rushed and the characters are almost nonexistent. Honestly you are better off reading something else.
regular for a fanfic. the character design leaves a lot to be desired and the writing too.----------------------------------------------------------------------
Imma be honest, this story sucks. The fact that it sucks, sucks. I want this to be a good story, but the author's writing doesn't always make sense and is hard to follow. The pacing is really convoluted, and there's a distinct lack of realism for how he gets away with what he does. Like I said, I really want this to be a good story, but it's just really difficult to follow.
The characters personality and backstory is extremely dumb and confusing.i mean it takes place in Gotham but it still makes no sense for his fellow students to beat him half to death and leave him to die in an alleyway since batman is around.plus them doing all this for a girl makes no sense.and him killing people in the first chapter and his quick acceptance of carnage is not well thought out.
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this is a great story, there are only a few grammar problems, except for this and wonderful I highly recommend this novel plus an advice make a country where you command in the soap opera and I am also Brazilian
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Good ideas but not enought development. too much revenge torture ****. Obsessive selfinsertion , where the mc is obssesed with harley queen, when he never ever saw her in the history. Name droping megan in the same school as the mc and she just up and ignores his bullying and his killing spree. He knows orange lanterns when its something he could never known as a common person. Mc got a iq of 200 and still is too stupid to realise his plans make no sense"forces the victim to write a will pasing everything she owns to him, and promptly kills her... as if that letter is worth anything... and hes basicaly the first person they would investigate. Also edgy edgy backstory, with no real need to be. Mc mother got raped instead of beying traumatized he still goes to school. He still lives normaly. He still studies because why tf not? Also somehow he never ever trought about revenge until after he got a power... 200 iq by itself is a superpower... Build a bomb and kill some of those people at least. I an stupid and i would at least killed some of those people. Also how hard is it to kill a dumb *****?
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dude when ever i try reading the book it doesnt let me and i tried different ways but they all dont work and it keeps showing error 404 fix it
I was really enjoying this fan fic until about chapter 20 I think. To start off it wasn’t the best but I enjoyed it a lot but then the story got boring and almost felt like the author gave up. The interactions between the author and MC was random and not written well. I am more upset because this story could have been so much better.
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Love this already the idea of this pure carnage always love the villians and anti hero’s with complex or articulate backgrounds in any type of book,show,fanfic,movies,etc. it always helps you sympathize with the character and gives you a look in a different view point
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haven't read it yrt bet damn looks great plz add more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more add moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd moreadd more
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This is a fun read. I would recommend others to read it too. The only problem I have is that. there aren't much updates in my opinion. But regardless it's still a good fanfic to read.
novel is good .. but writing quality sucks .. too many changes in pov that makes it confusing to read(￣(エ)￣)(￣(エ)￣)(￣(エ)￣)(￣(エ)￣)(￣(エ)￣)(￣(エ)￣)
This is going extremely fast and it's not doing a good job of immersion with how fast thing happen, two chapters in and he's already killed three gangs, got the attention of batman and bought a house with 250k that he stole of a gang and then hypnotized and bank clerck. I get that he fused memories with kakashi but how is he killing an eating people like churros? The interactions between Carnage and him are also bland. Either way even if you're doing this for fun and don't care about getting better, at least don't rush things like these. Small stuff matters. Hope you get better.
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