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摘要
Well, if I had plans for a wild adventure, this wasn’t what I had in mind.
One moment I’m crashing on the couch, thumbing through my dog-eared DC Comics collection, and the next... Boom! I’m smack dab in the middle of Metropolis, and let me tell you, it's not the Metropolis you see on postcards.
Imagine, the skyscrapers you dream about from movies and comics, now they're crumbling. Flashing lights and explosions paint the skyline. No, it's not some fancy holographic display; this is real, alarmingly real.
There I was, regular old me, standing in all my awkwardness in a city under siege by god-knows-what-and-who. Superman is up there, cape fluttering and all, throwing down with these ominous-looking entities. And me? I'm over here, equal parts stunned and terrified.
As debris rains down like a disaster movie on steroids, I’m diving for cover behind a partially collapsed building. The dusty, shredded pages of my comic collection flutter around me, a stark contrast to this gritty, chaotic reality.
Then, out of nowhere, this shimmering interface pops up, hanging in the air like a neon sign in Times Square. It’s like some cosmic computer screen offering me options like I’m about to pick a new phone plan.
I poke at it because what else do you do when you’re yanked from your comfy world and dropped into a super-powered showdown? The thing offers guidance, quests, and, get this, points. Points! Like I’m suddenly part of some cosmic rewards program.
So here I am, taking cover, trying not to stick out like a sore thumb in my jeans and old band t-shirt, while navigating an interface that might as well be from a sci-fi flick.
“Welcome to the Universal Network System,” it says. And I’m thinking, “Yeah, thanks for the warm welcome, but can I get a ticket back to my couch?”
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Really enjoying the fic so far, the writing and story quality are pretty good and entertaining. The only complaint I’ve got is that it seems like nearly every possible thing that can go wrong, does. Almost every single thing the MC gains also comes with some sort of downside. I totally agree with not making the MC op af and actually forcing them to struggle throughout the story, but the constant use of these downsides and bad luck to hinder the MC’s growth is honestly getting somewhat repetitive.
From your previous work I can tell that it will be good but please drop it
Its a decent read if not all the annoying descriptions. “He smiled in a relaxed demeanor despite the terrifying atmosphere” … “the pain on his face was severe and painful “ . AFTER EVERY SENTENCE IS A DESCRIPTION JUST LIKE THAT!!!!!
Another future masterpiece, you pulled off the previous ones am pretty sure you'll pull this one off as well.
Is there going to be an actual romance in this one is it going to end up like your last DC fanfiction?
Overall, it’s a very fun story. Like most stories it does have its flaws, such as plotlines that don’t have endings. But it also has great moments, and the characters are well written. Recommended if you like a good smartass protagonist and want/need inspiration yourself.
As of chapter 65? Fantastic. This is what system fic should strive for. Writing quality is amazing for Webnovel besides a few typos every three or four chapters in one sentence or so, but that doesn’t break the flow of reading at all. In all honesty I am a bit scared that wicked might drop this fic like he’s done the other ones but I will extend my trust that he doesn’t. All in all one of the best DC fics I have ever read, keep it up man, I am highly enjoying it.
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I don't ussually give reviews and it's really early in the novel to be giving a review but this novel is so well written and the story is so intresting I just had to say something and let my fellow web novel community know this is a seriously good DC comic fanfic. It's funny and well paced with a well thought out protaginist. And deffinetly not stupid no harem so far either (pls author no harem). Anyway read the novel people it's worth your time.
really love the system and characters so far, as a fan of the last DC fanfic this story has high expectations and I'm looking forward to it
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The ending feels a bit rushed, and the MC's power level essentially goes from average human to over 9000 pretty quick... However, the rest of the story more than makes up for it and I found myself thoroughly enjoying the experience.
it wasn't bad, just sad to see how the author lost motivation to continue this unique novel, but I called it.
Good fic, decent in all avenues but it's a comedy fic. It's just not for me. I'm leaving this comment to remind me later on.
It would be fun if Mc, as manager, united Volcana, Poison Ivy and Permafrost to create an idol band XD "the elememtales" for the care of the environment and if you want, also Cheetah for the care of animals XD