/ Anime & Comics / DC/HP: Hyperstorm!
摘要
Waking up with no memories of yourself as Jonathan Reed Richards, better known as Hyperstorm aka Mr ‘Nerf Please’, with his memories as a toddler was definitely a shock. Being in the DC universe was, guess what, a shock. But he was now Hyperstorm so he would deal with everything the world would throw at him. Doesn’t matter if it’s Joker, Justice League, Darkseid or a Hogwarts Letter!
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wait what?
Warnings:
•Harem
•OP MC(look up Hyperstorm respect thread)
•Genius MC
•Prideful(sometimes to the point of arrogance) MC
•Morally very questionable MC
•Manipulative and just a tiny bit evil MC
•Harry Potter crossover
•Gender-bent Harry
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寫檢討
His use of hyperstorms powers is meh. But since author made a fic that actually showed dumbledore as a normal Person rather than an evil all knowing mastermind, one who actually showed emotions made me give story high review There are many issues so far like how he compared one characters telepathy ability with original hyperstorm from his memories which should be highly unlikely cause in dc universe even Martian man hunter cannot surpass hyperstorm in such areas let alone a human witch with meta gene active. Also author, mc can make some random construct with reality manipulation which can adopt him and later practise his powers in isolated place. Please don’t nerf him for plot.
The problem is that there is no backstory for the mc and does he have other power and what is end goal.
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Ok I’m giving this book all five stars due to it being awesome but if later (I’m at chapter 3 now) one of two things happens I’m revoking this review and posting another worse review depending on the content 1: the harem is more than 3-4 girls 2: the mc takes all of Peter Parker’s love intrists Anyway good luck 🍀 author and hope for more
Gotta admit this book got interest immediately it's good so pls don't drop it
It's not perfect but it's above average.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters please
Eso no lo ví venir, eso sí que es otra onda!!! Fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico fantástico
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there is one glaring issue with this fanfiction..... the reader has no idea who the m.c is. The m.c knows he has hyperstorms memories and childlike body, but we don't know who he is at all. Nothing about who he is or where he is from. From context we could say he is from our earth but thats it. We don't know if he was a she or if they had a family etc. We get no details at all about who they are at all.