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Life is full of ups and downs, and nothing is certain. After losing his best friend to cancer, an orphan decides to leave his orphanage home.
He ends up in a new place, a place where modern technology is unheard and exist not.
In the vast and beautiful world; where strength speaks the loudest and luck is the difference between life and death, he strives to survive, facing each day armed with purpose and a newfound hope.
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The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
Sweetheart in one word I will say 'AMAZING' 😊 I really enjoyed it and I advice you to keep pushing cus this is an amazing start dear... To all those who read comments before reading a novel, this is an amazing one
The book is amazing, The characters are clearly distinguished. The story has a sense of mystery to it. And the world background is easy to imagine. The story is told with cinematic ambience that a makes it play out in the mind .Nice one author👍
Author did a good job here. Fantasy novels need to be written well to work and the author did just that. Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The book is so interesting. Starting from the first chapter, you can easily get hooked on it—author, fantastic job. There are no issues with the novel, and I love every bit of it.
A lovvely book. That's the only thing I can say. I read a lot of comment before reading and I have to say. I wasn't disappointed. 👌
Amazing… if you are already reading this I guess you understand. If you aren’t then you should. I’ll live to see this grow into something big
Hush… don’t give yourself reasons not to read this. Give this a try and thank me later Click the add to library and then read now. Enjoy.
If you are contemplating on reading this then you shouldn’t cause this is a fine read that get you going. I don’t know your interesting but I can assure you, this book is good.
A few words from will be ‘Give This A Try’. For a new author he did an amazing job with this. This has a lot of potential so don’t miss out
All I have to say is this is an amazing story If you aren’t reading then you should. You shouldn’t miss out. A big shout out to the author ride on
what can I say? it's not so easy for one to put down ideas into words. My heart was drawn to the story just from the first chapter. the mc had to suffer from mental distress after losing the one dear to him at a very young age. And the interesting part he never gave up on life both continued. honestly, the spice of the story is flowing so well.
I’m proud to say I’m a fan of this work. So far the story aa been good. The book is intriguing and has a lovely flow. Not too fast not too slow. Though there are things to work on this remains a great story.
The story is getting more and more interesting! The writing is good, and the overall background and story are really well thought through! Can't wait for new chapters!
This was so amazing. Nice pace. lovely effort in the dialogue. Great plot. Though I feel you should put more effort on the side characters like Lee Wei, Xue Li. There are more possibilities with them. Well keep it up author.
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I’m going to give a five star for this novel. It’s amazing. Author you should keep it up. I sympathize with Huno on his experience so far and I just love Luna’s ability. I want to see how you develop her.
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This is a really great story. Though there are some things to work on like the world background. The story is a really good one with a lovely plot.
First I would say the author did a good job for a first time story. The writing is good and so is the plot. But I think you should work on your world background. So far the book is amazing. Keep it up and grow.
Interesting story with wonderful world building. The unique concept starting from loss of dearest one to his adventure to strange land makes me curious to know more about the journey of MC and how he gonna deal with it. Great work author!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]