/ Book&Literature / Darken Rahl in Game of Thrones
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Darken Rahl (book) died in the Garden of Life, but by the will of some entity or by chance was reborn as a teenage half-blood that had the blood of Ancient Valyria in his veins. But that's where his noble origins and perks end. Now he is no longer the Master of an entire empire, but only a homeless vagabond in the city of Tolos of the Bay of Slavers that got there a few days before the start of the Baratheon Rebellion in Westerosse. And now Darken has a new and uncharted world to live in.
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He writes a near-perfect story, there may be minor mistakes since he is a newbie, but he found it worth reading for a long time. As someone who reads and evaluates every fiction, I found it very nice. Don't focus too much on character, especially from a military perspective. It is a newly established kingdom, unless it is a fanatic follower of a religion such as Islam or Christianity. You cannot keep the army together, especially in such an ignorant age.
Good so far. spelling and place name's are sometimes wrong but the story makes up for it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't know who MC is, but the plot is just wonderful. I wish he would meet the canon characters, father, mother, I would like to see the reaction of Varys, Baelish, Stanis, Robert, Ned, MC's mother after chapter 12!
great fanfics it has everythink ! hope you go on more on it ! i don't know Darken Rahl but what a interesting character ! (he really rughless)
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