/ Anime & Comics / Danmachi: Starting with three skills (Hiatus)
摘要
Follow the life of Flon Algon as he explores the world of Danmachi with three unique skills.
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First of all, I'm not the original author of this fanfiction, I'm just a translator but I had included some unique content to make the story more interesting. Please leave a review if you liked it.Cheers!!
original author: Infinite Super Magic
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I see many inconsistencies in the story and sudden jumps if you stop to think about it and the MC's attitude leaves a lot to be desired. In my opinion it is a fairly vague story and lacks development The mc literally shouts skills like a child when he says he is older
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I like the Story it´s a pleasend read hope you contiue the updates / Translation, and how long is the Original ?
Hey, guys! Thanks for reading my novel. Even though this is just a translation, I've added some unique elements to make it more interesting. If you enjoyed it, please leave a comment and a review; that would be greatly appreciated. Have a great day! Cheers!!