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A somewhat socially awkward man, who was isolated from society due to his absurd amount of frankness and the fact that he rarely chooses not to voice up his thought when annoyed, finds himself in a world of Gods and adventure.
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first he is not prideful, so if you are expecting escanor this is not for you. second he reveals every skill to his god and pantheon colleagues.
well the story is ok....but the main theme is messy .... sin of 😤 pride is "Proud people not only put themselves before others, they separate themselves from others" there are positive and negative effects of pride ....so if the term sin 🤔 is added its denote negative side.... overall the mc is not prideful enough or doing the wrongful things in the name of pride 🤔 , if the mc is a girl ill directly tel is acting Tsundere.... the mc theme follows character "cid"(delusional psychopath with 2nd dimension disease ) totally not pride.. atleast try fgo/ubw gilgamesh (not fully sinful pride its atlest heroic kingly pride)... reply guys if ur opinion differs..,
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this fanfic is worthy of being read, the mc is like escanor and didn't wait to join a familia like most fanfics which usually wait to join hestia or either go with loki or hephaestus but the mc didn't. so far I like this fic thus I'll be reading the new chapters to come.
I love the mc and how he get more prideful as more chapters go on, not even Escanor was prideful when he was a kid.
¿Vas agregar lilit cómo la rencarnación de fianna a la familia y haruhime también Y también va estar así en harem????????????????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
it's nice the story feels solid and slightly unique just with the pride and familia.
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This is the best danmachi fanfic I have read, good idea and originality, the writing quality is superb . Can't wait for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Its good and the only thing missing is f he looked like escanor everything else is really good, no grammar mistakes so far so its good ……… 💀 no cap frfr
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The story does not stand out in any way at the moment. The quality of the writing is on par, the updates are stable at the moment. About the plot silent, as there are few chapters (the main thing is that it would not roll into the trash, because where there is gacha, usually end badly for the story). Character design is typical Oyash, with hubris (gives a twist), original (I guess) choice of family. Story as story. Typical gacha with golden eggs, Superpowers and so on. If you can't find anything, you can safely proceed.