/ Anime & Comics / Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
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Yami travels to the world of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? and join the Familia of Goddess Hephaestus!
Simple synopsis: The Mc have a Simulator system where he can simulate through different world to obtain different power to become stronger. He can also travel to different world to conqueror the world and invite familia from other world!
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The story at first was good, but as it went on I got more and more lazy about reading it. I don't understand the MC, if you like Hestia why don't you just join the Hestia family instead of Hephaestus, he's like a traitor because of everything he did for Hestia, and used the Hephaestus family for his own security. I wonder if when he gets stronger he will leave the Hephaestus family and become the Hestia family🤣🤣. I think he's just like Hestia's slave, all for Hestia. He didn't have a stance, he just agreed with everything Hestia said and prioritized Hestia over Hephaestus when the two argued. This is my personal opinion about this novel. Thank you😁
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The Simulation system is a literal legitimate CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) story system but one with actual tangible rewards base on how well the MC does. And I gotta say that is an amazing concept that I've never seen before. I am worried about how the plot will work out as a system like this IS fascinating, but easily and quickly will/can run into "The Gamer" issue of the MC reaching a point so unbelievably powerful in such a short time that the writer HAS to railroad ways in such that the MC at least has a chance to loose/fail, and even those that are done correctly are very few in number. Or the writer just doesn't try and the story becomes nothing but wish fulfillment power fantasy that a 10-12 year old would think is the best thing since a pizza and ice cream party/birthday. Those CAN be fun once in awhile too no matter how old you get/are. The dialogue comes out a bit strange so far, with the MC literally SAYING he is a new arrival to someone and them responding by asking the MC if they are new here... And that is just one of many instances. So dialogues need re-orderings if not full rewrites. Otherwise treat it like a half CN translated story and turn part of your brain off when reading... Here is to hoping that things turn out great and looking forward to reading more, if for nothing else than because of this story's spin on a simulation system. This was written after chapter 10 (just after starting chapter 11 Rewards)
You are doing a good job and I just don't like the character too much but it's not ypur fault .It's too much Hestia this Hestia that but she is great legal Loli well there is Illiya from Fate who is cute but then again she is illegal in some stories .Also can you tell me the MtL Version? I like to loose my Iq quite a bit
everything is good, the only flaw was everything that MC got from his simulation went to hestia while he IS member of Hephaestus family, and mc might or (if not) already quit and joining hestia
Amazing read with a different take compared to others. Looking forward to read more of this.
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Muy buena la novela. Sigue asi. Recomiendo Fairy Tail y dxd para una simulación .............. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Come back author!!! I can't stand looking for something decent to read, and only finding rubbish! You write so well man! Forget about your other stories and focus here for a bit! Please! Hahaha Congratulations on the work here!
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Great story. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. I'll never say no to a good danmachi fic, there aren't many................................
Great story, the only problem I found was the quick development of the character, despite the 154 chapters... I think it could have been developed more in the main world part, the MC has little Interaction with everyone, so in my opinion, whoever is reading feels less attached to the development of the MC.But I really like the story a lot
It has a lot of potential! The relationship that the MC builds alongside Hephy is step by step, which is very rewarding! It's not forced... I hope the author continues, it's one of my favorite Danmachi stories!
At the start it was good… but after a few chapters it got worse.. not recommended to read
The main character is obsessed with Hestia for no reason. I hope it will be fixed as the story continues ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------