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摘要
I died, and instead of a permanent death, I found myself in a strange world with the game I was working on in my past life. Gods roaming the earth? Familias? Well, what do I do? I guess I will just do what the winds tells me to do.
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To be honest, I am just coming up with things as I go on. Don't expect good plot or something. If you find plot holes, do tell me and I might fix it. If you have any ideas, I'm all ears. Read, comment, and tell me about this trash I'm about to release to the world.
Average chapter word count: 2k
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perfect perspective for the isekai universe (what fool can't get what he wants while he has all the power isekai awk isekai fanfic isekai was a fact that you can make your most perverted desires and purest dreams come true
To be honest, for me, this fanfic is quite a unique work. Why? Because I haven't found anything that I would really appreciate there, and yet it is still good enough to continue reading. It's strongest side definitely lies in the humor. It also has quite nice fights; it is extremely well measured in strength proportions and isn't scared of bold ideas. About its uniqueness, it lies in terms of morality. It wouldn't be a lie to say that there is none. I mean, I wouldn't ever consider that those characters that appear could ever become main cast, but here we are. Even the protagonist's personality isn't that of a hero, antyhero, or anything you could ever expect. His personality feels as if he were born as a thug in Danmachi and later studied some math in our world, learned some of our culture, and went back to Danmachi. That also makes the story take many unconventional turns. That makes the story interesting, but sometimes the story is uncomfortable to read, yet even those moments are often laced with comedy. I would say that this story is quite grotesque. Often mixing comedy with dark humor. I certainly wouldn't recommend it to people weak mentally. I would like to complain about pacing though. Often it is all over the place: At first, the whole system stood as a quite hard-to-beat wall of text. I know it was necessary, but some fragments were hard to read, as if a professor took something quite easy yet decided to make that as hard to understand as possible. At first, fights were much more dynamic. And I know it's mostly because he had much easier enemies to deal with, but some present chapters are literally a fight to a fight to a fight. Often with additional POV change that makes it all even more tedious. That problem got even more obvious to me after the last chapter that literally made me happy because it slowed the tempo, even though I'm not a fan of the whole development—I don't like which characters the focus is on, I don't like the protagonist, and I don't even like his abilities, yet I am still here, standing on the edge of the cliff, with a beautiful view, but dirty pants because of the height.
Pretty good so far I like it 👍 Although I am wondering why the MC seems so weak even though he’s a goliath and has seemingly good stats … .
es algo irritante de leer, el protagonista es un tipo con muy sacado de sus cabales, creo que para algunos puede ser bueno pero yo paso. amigo la historia tiene de que pero creo que es algo muy sofocante de leer se que es un Goliat pero el cambio de raza le restó mucho al personaje y agrégale que es un tipo cliché de protagonista que piensa con la polla. amigo es mucho en una sola historia
Good: rational mc, interesting items from gacha. Bad: repetitiveness with gacha info, character progression (he is strong at the beginning and that's basically it), a bit boring mc (there are highlights, but between them...)
Very good ff and have a very important question after reading till newest chapter will there be a FL like ishtar or someone from the familia or will he become great sage I would be happy if you could answer thx
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I like this. Is he going to become a 15 foot tall giant or something later in the story
Pls just kill Ishtar or activate the breaker blade Also read this godammed story NOW
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i would say that it's overall a decent fanfic where the MC doesn't care about others'opinions. Good for casual readers.
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Your best supporter is yourself, a wise man once said. I will support this book of mine despite. I will give myself stones. I will and have rate my book five stars. However, I won't be deleting reviews or comments, since its only fair for everyone to have their opinion. Aren't I a good man? If you have question, ask me below.