/ Anime & Comics / Danmachi- Merchant of Orario
摘要
A reincarnated man sells his stock of items. Some nick nacks, other bells and whistles. And a couple of items that could change the world forever.
BTW this was originally from Wattpad but this is made with the authors full permission, because I am the author.
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Honestly author ways of writing is good......but when i read this novel i didnt even laugh once....it feel like reading was a chore.
Good story the quality goes up and down and honestly if the author just adds some more dialogue and smooths out the mistakes it’ll be a 5star fic Especially with the interesting premise of a merchant who we even don’t know where he gets his items
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es buena historia, pero es algo confuso el pasado del protagonista y entre más avanza la historia más confuso se vuelve, eso crea agujeros de trama a cada rato, la estructura es buena y en si no se explica de dónde saca las cosas le personaje. dejando eso de lado es divertido solo quiere que cojas con pinzas la historia y no te claves tanto en los detalles
I've read up to the latest chapters in wattpad, still have no idea how he got his things. Like are they random or what?