/ Fantasy / Dance with the Nightingale
摘要
The Nightingale.
The beauty and the taboo existing together.
Unattainable and unacceptable.
An existence only to be admired from afar.
A hero of legends but a also a girl of tragedy.
Shining like a star in the sky, all alone, forever…
-But that’s too sad isn’t it?
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Our MC, an ordinary middle aged man, is an author that wrote books and after pouring 2 years of hard work in a book, his hardwork finally bore fruit as his book got the second prize in the regional awards.
A fruit that he couldn't eat.
Why?
Because he along with hard work, he also poured his piss somewhere he shouldn't and died.
Exactly how?
Read the prologue, and you will find out~
But of course, that's only the start, as the next time he woke up...
He was in another world.
Follow the guy as he turns from a middle aged author to a Young Master in a magical world.
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Hey guys author here…
It’s my first novel, but I will try to make this good.
Good luck me.
Vote this book with power stones, it really helps with your support.
Before giving up please read Prologue and 1st 10 chapters.
Also I have set up prologue to be a bit funny and ridiculous, so, don't mind next chapter won't be like that.
My discord server link: https://discord.gg/8dvVYW8QUn
P.S.: I don't own the cover art, whoever does can take credit for it.
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The last and final simp, must my classic the book is good, and it's not gonna suddenly be dropped. I am a new writer and, it's just been 2 weeks that I started, I never wrote anything before this, and in just in these 2 weeks I can feel myself growing as a writer. I hope I continue to grow and I hope people like my work, any complaints you have just post it in chapter comments or write a review
Dropped after 5 chapters. My main reason for dropping is, too many unnecessary sentences, showing mental thought of mc. Unnecessarily increasing the word count by at least 4 times. All that stuff of 5 chapters could have been done in one chapter of same length.
This novels is really nice and have good development. I also like how there are always some funny jokes in between every situation. Love the characters and books so far. Keep up the good work author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is an simp, just trying to rate the book and I think the book is a good read, also I am going to edit the first few chapters on Sunday, there will be the last chapter of week today or tomorrow but there will be no bonus chapter.
I really enjoyed it [img=update][img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
————————————————————-—-🔥🔥🔥Great book with very interesting plot and characters. Recommend everyone to give it a try. 👍👍👍 ——————————————————————
One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.
I really like the story. World built and story is great. Looking forward to coming back of the Author. I hope you come back.[img=update]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.
Just read it. Trust me, it’s a great novel. Just spend a few minutes reading, and if you like it, just drop some powerstones and leave a review!
well a good novel with an intersting approach of fantasy powers the background of the mc is mind blowing i already read story with a similar problem for the mc but this one is introduced in a way that make the readers think that the mc might not survive for long overall a good story
Would normally give the story 4.5/5 but there's a lot of stories there are written 10x times worse and gets better scores than this one. I don't rly understand webnovel score system, but this story defnly deserves the 5 stars a lot more than a lot of other stories, so ig ill give it 5 stars. Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.
it is a great story with an unresponsive community ,it might be some people's might not be for others i got hooked on the second chapter read the first 10 chapters than decide whether it is worth continuing or not (p.s there might be grammatical mistakes which will break the immersion so if you find any mistake than post a para comment on it ,this author sees them and corrects them accordingly , if you hit the mark. so, don't worry about being ignored)
Very pleasant story. Enjoyed the pacing and character development. Looking forward to where this will be going. I suggest you to try it once. 😉
Hey Guys, Author's Review here. This is a very good read, that much I would have said even if I was not the author here. So read it and give it a try. I give it 5/5 rating. Let's see...... Writing Quality: I am a newbie author, but even then I have a good grasp of Grammar so, don't expect Grammatically incorrect sentences, there can be sometimes a few typos of forgotten words but that's understandable I'm not a machine Story: Story is a slow pace at first which will evolve into normal pace around 15th chapter, 1st few chapters are basically slow to showcase the world. Character Design: Every character is important there won't be a single character who will speak like a bot and I have a lot of confidence to create good characters. Updates: Unless I have a real life crisis I will update according to what RR I have given. World background: A medival fantasy, with a lot of sci-fi elements, anything else would be a spoiler