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Jacob Steve, an Old Man, died at 116 after living a whole life.
But Jacob always had a dark side, which he always suppressed and hid from others.
However, in the later years of his life, when death was inevitable, he understood there wasn't any point in having wealth, knowledge, or desires if you couldn't have a life to enjoy them.
He became obsessed with fabled immortality and devoted his reaming life to extending his fleeting lifespan, but just like any other, he failed.
However, he mysteriously got another chance at life and found a way that led to fabled immortality.
But he was also forewarned that the way led to it was filled with blood and darkness!
In the end, Jacob chose it anyway with no way of going back, and it was also the start of his suffering and his icky, brutal journey toward the 'Immortality' he wanted so badly!
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A real hidden gem among the pile of trash in web novels..amazing story with a realistic ruthless mc..Quality of writing is superb..and I can't wait for more chapters to be released..Highly recommended novel read it and you won't regret
Review after chapter 217. Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks. Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance? Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech. Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion. This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!
There are only 23 chapters out right now, but so far its great. The grammar is much better than the start of the authors other book.......,,
The novel starts of slow but picks up the pace ,one of the things i didn't like in this novel of the character of the mc ,the mc is too paranoid and wants respect even when he had not shown half his capability, sometimes he lets someone live even after seeing one of his best technique and uses enemies tools without knowing consequences .
a really great novel and perfect mc cold and ruthless doesn't have some dumb hero complex would even let millions die on his way to immorality.
Very Nice novel. Not for light hearted people. I would say it feels like a second coming of RI.
After finishing the first volume I’ve decided to post my review. The biggest issue is that the author really needs an editor to do a quick once over, there are misused words everywhere, second is that the setting becomes very boring after a while, the trope of everyone backstabbing everyone else is rampant to the point of ridiculousness, the MC use of technological knowledge is good however. The story has promise and if you like a ruthless heartless monster of an MC you might enjoy this book! 3.4/5 total
In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)
I don’t really have much to say about it. One of the best novels I’ve read in a while. The protagonist is absolutely amazing. No romance as well which is great.
I've been reading this novel now for almost 1.2 yrs and just have to say one thing about it, i got the same goosebumps reading this from the first day till now. highly recommended
hello wahi I just realised that chapters are getting short and shorter after 500chaps
Finally decided to make a review for this novel. First off I am caught up to chapter 507. For me one of the few I personally would give a complete five star for as it has exceeded all my expectations for character, world building and power system. Character: Extremely well done everyone has enough depth to them. The mc is smart and watching how he uses his wits to beat the odds is truly satisfying. The main character uses everything at his disposal to gain power and survive in this deadly world. A lot of times a mc who is evil and doesn’t have attachments with other characters can get boring and monotonous as I will need to take a break before coming back to read more but I have not experienced it with this novel at any point. The world is vast and we learn more as the mc does it does what is needed providing us with a place we want to learn more about and explore. The power system is a bit complex and can be hard to grasp but is well thought out and the power is well earned each time. As the story progresses the power and abilities the mc gains become more and more interesting. The story feels very natural on how it progresses and continues to improve where the stakes become higher but the rewards are as well. I am not that great with reviews but I highly recommend on reading this.
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This novel presents a very poor use of the English language, and the power levels and different rankings are ten times worse. However, the novel stands out with a unique and exceptional protagonist. He is incredibly intelligent and lacks empathy for others as long as it benefits him. He will go beyond all limits to obtain what he desires, showing no concern for others and sacrificing millions of lives as if they mean nothing. His journey towards immortality seems to be solitary, without even friends or someone he can trust, even a little. Despite these negative aspects, the novel is remarkably wonderful and enjoyable to read, and I highly recommend it to experience a truly unique story.
I love MC, cruel and rational, sometimes he makes silly decisions but what can he do, he is paranoid because he got only one life, also immortika is true entertainer lol 🤣🤣
my most favorite no.1 novel so far as I like stories with mc's like jacob in this one and i have a question author's other novel 'Eternal Thief' also has shrewd, selfish and calculative mc like this one or not?
I would only say about this story that if you like a shrewd and astute Mc you would love it... I appreciate suggestions and honest reviews, so please go all out with both... Lastly, if you find any spelling mistakes or grammar errors please point them out! #Wahi {: