摘要
Puppy love?
Crush?
First love?
Unang tibok ng puso ng isang musmos na bata. Maari bang maging malalim na pagtingin ang isang mababaw na paghanga?
Ito po ang pangalawang tagalog novel ng inyong abang lingkod.
Masasabi ko pong ito ay partly, ang tagalog version ng first novel ko, My First Love, pero hindi po ang kabuuan. Maari pong may maiba sa takbo ng story.
Sana po ay samahan ninyo muli ako sa novel kong ito.
Maraming salamat po.
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So far, I enjoyed reading this story. Writing Quality is good, it is coherently understand by readers. In terms, of story development, the story is more focus on the characters which is good because it doesnt make the stories complicated compared to some other stories. However, it does not convey more details about the past moment of two characters While in characters build up , it somehow related to the usual stories that can be read in ebook /pocketbook. So it doesnt really give big impact. And, on its world background, it is typical, which is good for me because it depicts practicality.anyone can imagine the stories in reality. Good thing is , it does not exaggerate the story. And in terms of updating it still on progress.
Nice story, hoping it's get more popular. Supportive Kaya ako😂😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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Nice not the typical story . It's not boring, many happening in the story. It's cute and adorable story. 🖤🖤🖤 Keep going 👍 hehehehe hope to read a lot more from the writer. More exciting plot and characters.
ang ganda ng mga kwento ni author...relate much...😍 sana madami pa akong mabasa na novel na gawa nyo...nakakainlove na me nakakatakot...deserve ng 5 star!
Very nice story and novel..nakakainspired basahin kahit na pangteens ang estorya nakakarelate parin. Thumbs up to you author sana marami kapang magagawang story at nobela 😊😍
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The story is fun to read though it has a common scenery to other stories but surely it will capture your heart and mind. While reading this I have some giggle moments especially to the male character. lm sure anyone could easily relate and understand this truly especially teenage. And this be a highly recommended to read for your friends, classmates and families.
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I've been reading the reviews on this book....My anticipation and expectation have been built up nicely...I've saved this story in my library so I'll be reading this soon...Enjoy reading! 😊
Its a good story to read and its amazing story Its a good story to read and its amazing story Its a good story to read and its amazing story Its a good story to read and its amazing story Its a good story to read and its amazing story Its a good story to read and its amazing story
I like the story, prang noong high school life ko lng, nkkakilig lng n para bang noong kabataan ko lng yn.. hahaha.. nakakaaddict magbasa tlga
I cant wait for another chapter..😍 kakilig Ang story para akong bumalik sa teenager ko..haha love ko n tuloy magbasa NG magbasa.. thanks sa writer n nagsulat NG nakakakilig n story I remember my teenagers day! 😍
O really like the story parang bumabalik ako sa kabataan ko it makes me feel excited haha. But anyways sana magkatuluyan sila in the end kahit may mga balahid its part of life just keep the faith and love will come at the right time...so im waiting for the next update. Soon i hope so.. At saba hindi masyadong pa hard to get si lexi alams na ntin nga noon crush niya mahal n Keep me updated plddddd- .
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