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the side of a woman from a village who is looking for work in a big city where she works as a cafe waitress who meets a handsome but hard-hearted CEO.
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That's an interesting story to read. As for forces beyond reason, I would enjoy it for at least a moment to reflect on something that's a little absurd. Might have. But it will make us think critically and pleasantly I like and corroborate your incredibly accurate story. The spirit of your story is in my collection.
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Wow, is this the English version? I like this genre. Each of the words is very easy for the reader to understand. Author's spirit of writing I support you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Halo kak aku menyapa!! Aku akhirnya nemu fantasy inggris!! Hebat lah bisa inggris!! Aku tuh pengen bisa juga!! Dan aku paling seneng sama fantasy sihir gini. Bisa buat belajar juga. Semangat kak! 🤗
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Done reading the 3 chapters. Oh ya, mau kasi saran sedikit nih, kalau boleh 🤭 saat kamu menterjemahkan dari Indo ke Rnglish, kalau bisa kalimatnya baku aja, bisa juga cek ke KBBI biar saat di translate, kalimatnya tidak setengah indoenglish gitu. Karakternya cewek kan, ya nah, pas jadi english ini harusnya 'she' bukan 'he'. Kalau mau pake aplikasi 'Grammarly', itu free, aku pakai juga, biar kalimatnya sesuai Englishnya. Maaf ya, saranku kepanjangan. Semangat! Oke👍💜
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Waow ... the story that is presented is interesting. a mixture romance and conflict.❤❤❤❤❤Can't wait for Up the next chapter. 😍😍😍❤❤❤❤👌👌👌👌