/ Fantasy / Crimsoux: The Supreme Species
摘要
[This is the part one of my first novel. The premise is good if I do say so myself. So please give it a try.]
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In the unimagined future of mankind and the alien race, one particular outcast lives to cause chaos in the two worlds. Then one day, he receives an invite to a school for unique superhumans like himself.
But little did he expect that the peculiar dangers of that 'measly' school would deepen his perspective on why it was good to be alive!
This is the story of a virtually-immortal man and his journey as he embarks into a realm of devastating anomalies, other unkillable immortals, and a world where the thin line between life and death quickly becomes clearer.
... This is the journey of Earth's special monster, a Crimsoux.
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Most of the early chapters are 2000+ words per chapter, cuz the pacing is kind of slow.
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I've read 6 chapters so far and I can't make heads or tails of what's happening, it tells so much but at the same time tells us nothing about other things, grammar is phenomenal tho
this is a curious little novel, although it's difficult to understand the power system in the beginning and we don't exactly understand what's going on as well for the first few chapters. Though it does manage to incite curiosity and keeps the reader going. unfortunately, a lot of readers on webnovel don't have that patience and might end up just dropping it. I suggest the author creates an auxiloiary chapter with a character list to and an indepth into how exactly abilities work, so confused readers might use it for reference.All in all, this is a unique work, and i look forward to reading more
I had thought this book was perfect till I wore the shoes of a reader and started reading it myself recently. And although few, it still has misspelt words in some parts and in some others, words that didn't really seem necessary. The early chapters are bulky, having 2.3k words in just one chapter, so this often led me to feeling like I'm not making progress in scrutinizing it because of the time I spend reading it.But then again, for a first book with a lot of thinking behind it, each chapter is an exciting experience; the abilities of the characters are really unusual and unique; and the MC is still building up into a peculiar one, being a soul-sucking vampire who likes scaring people as a hobby and having detachable body parts lol.I acknowledge the flaws but... I'm still giving my book 5 dang stars. I know how much I worked on it, so I'm giving myself praise. Let's all deal with it... And read it, please. (~‾▿‾)~