/ Fantasy / Crimson Tower
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Daimon Crimson, a vampire who had lived for centuries in a modern world where vampires were considered legends, found himself bored to death with nothing to challenge him, despite his eternal life.
As the strongest vampire, no one could match him in combat, leaving him unfulfilled until a momentous day arrived. World Towers suddenly materialized all over the world, interconnected structures that had to be conquered to save the world from destruction.
Upon entering one of these towers and facing the monsters within, Daimon experienced an unparalleled thrill. He was ecstatic to discover that the monsters were remarkably powerful, finally providing the excitement he had been yearning for all this time.
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The concept of my two favorite things, tower climbing with an op non-human mc, yet it somehow got ruined in every way. The dialogue is so cringe i think it did genuine physical damage. The way the Mc talks is unnecessary and the use of fancy words is repetitive and consumes most of the chapters. While the plot is bland and goes in one direction, there’s barley anything known about the Mc even though he’s immortal, you think there’d be some background right? but nope, same goes for side characters or relations, a robotic story with no real progression. So overall, i’ve gained permanent frown lines from the intense frowning and my hopes crushed on a waste of this true potential story design! So unless you’re an edgelord don’t read this ⚠️[img=angry]
The author just uses a lot of fancy sounding words to fill up slave and make the MC look mysterious and sophisticated. Towers appeared and everyone suddenly became Captain America and wanted to save the world. There was none of the realistic chaos and upheaval. I only read a few chapters but I don't need to a Sharigan to know this novel is a waste of time
NOVEL HAS UPSIDES AND DOWNSIDES. THE MC WAS LIKABLE THEN BECAME WEIRD. HE ALWAYS HAS SOMETHING TO SAY AND ALWAYS DECIDES TO SAY IT AND NOT KEEP IT IN HIS HEAD. ALTHOUGH IT CAN BE EXPECTED FROM AN IMMORTAL SOMETIMES. OVERALL IT CAN IMPROVE AND HOPEFULLY AUTHOR WRITES MORE ACTIONS THAN "WORDS" IF YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY. ANYWAY 7.5/10 BUT ME GENEROUS SO HERE IS 5 STAR...
I have never read an utter piece of garbage like this before . Too much fancy sounding nonsense to make the MC look mysterious and sophisticated but it makes him look like an idiot . I only read this to get a fast pass and i regret choosing this one than the other really 😔😮💨
idk but it just feels kinda weird with the writing and it's totally unrealistic how there are multiple people who wants to enter the tower to protect the world or whatever, random strangers suddenly saying they should stand together or whatever EITHER this was written by an AI or someone who thinks the world is a bunch of bird and flowers
This is the second novel I’ve read this week that was written by an AI. In the other one, it was obvious that it was made by an AI. In this one, the author tried to disguise it, but it didn’t work at all because the extremely robotic dialogue the protagonist has with a stranger out of nowhere in the first chapter gave it all away.
this novel have great potential. unique and amazing character. i will be waiting on your update author so please update moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
is interesting has pontecial, I wish all the luck to the writer.... sometimes it seems that it was written with the help of an AI, but most of the new books here on the platform were also so I don't see a problem, but the MC is really very strange I can only imagine it similar to HxH's hisoka
[img=recommend][img=recommend]I'm enjoying the novel so far, but I would like to know more about the MC and his past. However, the novel is still in its early chapters, so I'm sure we'll learn more about him in the future.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
For those unwilling to read it all - I dont reccomend reading the book in its current version. If you wonder why, please read. —— I think that the story has high potential to be good, but currently its not that good. There is indeed a good english,good writing in sense of no mistakes but majority of chapters is simple gibberish that elufes feeling of being written by Ai and not planned, as there are so many things that just constantly repeat. Updating stability seems okay. Story development is rushed and lacks any sense of planning, no ,,goal”, relationships , friendships , characters to remember aside from MC, about whom we alos know very little about. a lot written about his long, ancient life). Sadly i would go to say that there is no story at all, atleast nothing to make it exciting, engaging and evoking a feeling of wanting and wondering to know what will next. When i was talking about characters , the situation of MC is just sad, because i bet there could be a lot written about his long,ancient life instead of just constantly reminding us of the joy,excitment and chaos he enjoys. No particular side characters, i dont count those few lines mentions that tell nothing of them. There is not even some dialogue… The world is propably the only thing aside from stablity of updates that seems to be good, i genuinely think that there was a thought before the creation of the names and that there was some thinking behind it, it just doesnt show in fullest. The book is sadly by me in the current state unreadable, if there is a change at any point i am willing to give it a reread.