/ Fantasy / Creating a World Can't be that Difficult, Right?
摘要
When God revealed his existence to humanity, he gave us the power to create worlds and make them evolve, hopping that this way he would find his successor. Little did he know that humans would make this gift into the next great hit that would entertain millions of people all around the globe.
Follow Axel on his journey to create a functional world of cultivation while he becomes a better creator at the expense of his world's inhabitants' wellbeing.
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My plan is to publish a new chapter every day except Sundays.
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Well, this is my novel, so I'm just going to vote for 5 stars instantly, not because its perfect but because I think it will become something pretty cool in the future. In this novel, you can expect two main plots, one from the point of view of the main character and other from the point of view of various characters inside the MC's world. You can say that the MC's point of view tells you the main events of the story and how his world evolves little by little, and the other shows how this evolution happens and how the MC's actions affect the characters inside the world. If I should say a weakness, it would probably be that my English is not the best as I'm not a native speaker and this is my first novel written in this language, but I hope to get better while I write. I hope you like it and I'll see you around :D
Well, I don't really make alot of reviews here on webnovel since I don't know how to express my feelings in a language I am not proficient in, so lets get started. First, The story pacing is kinda fast which leaves me confused most of the time, going for one place to another within a few sentences, idk if its just me but meh its my opinion. Second, the characters are quite bland tbh, Mc is like a piece of leaf in a stream just going with everything, which is in my opinion Bad, The mc and his friends are like robots with the way they speak and having no personality, I suggest you make them have personality like having likes,hates,favorites etc. it can be like wearing a red shirt because he likes the color, or eating this and that because its his favorite and why. Third, although the concept is good (God Sim is the best) it is executed quite badly, nothing is really unique with how his world is built and only doing what he is told to add and choosing from that without an ounce of his own creativity (Idk if it gets better in later chapters)... just like a robot. All in all its not bad, but needs improvement although there are grammar mistakes here and there they are acceptable
in my opinion, it's pretty good. I'm not that good a writing reviews but this has very little of them and I feel like it deserves more stars.
I have caught up with the current chapter ie chp157, I highly recommend Reading this novel i really liked it. Writing Quality - Its top notch, There are few to no typos. At first interaction btween mc and his friends is a bit awkward. Other than that I dont see any other problems so 4.5 Stars.(But il round it off to 5 ;) ) Stability of the Updates- 5stars, No need for any explanations i think. Story development- 5stars i rlly like where the author is taking the story and btw this novel is very addictive... Character design- The characters in mc's world r not dumb robots they have character, That makes this novel so much more interesting.. 5stars World background-This is a world building novel ofc the world building is good, The info dumbs r minimal. And even those info dumbs r interesting Overall- A must read. Read it rn. Support the author. Give powah stonesss etc etccc 5Stars overall
揭示劇透 Brooooooo this novels so goooood . I like it sooo much I'm 25chps in rn and it's totally addictive author sama is Joddddd hope he doesn't drop this master piece. I love it a lot as of now. highly recommended...
finally, I've caught up with the story, I like it quite a lot, happy to see where it goes in the future, but overall the story sticks pretty well to the base idea of the novel, instead of drifting off into something else, keep up the good work author.
I'm enjoying how the history of the Indo is, I like the concept of world creation, I hope it doesn't get monetized because I read it through google translator lol
gosto de mais dessa novel eu so quero mais capitulos , e quero que o autor tome cuidado para onde a historia val e tente pençar mais no futuro para que so melhore e tenha muitos cap mais que não seja chato ou enjoativo so isso a dizer.[img=recomendar]
The principle of this novel is great, I always love world creation novels but there arent many where the MC is actually in full control of his world. I hope the author doesnt drop this its GREAT.
i love the concept and the way you present the whole thing as a game but you probably put a bit to much into seeing the pov of the people inside his world or it gets a bit boring so you could switch to different people also i just wonder if someone tried to make a Pokémon like world or a full on beast world and the dragon one doesn't count that is just 1 entity also i hope you do make it a bit like a cultivation world with the special bodies like a fire one or water and maybe allow the heaven AI give a blessing to a person of her choice. god honestly i can think of so many things you could with this story and world i hope you do not drop it and maybe just maybe give a couple of more chapters .
I like the idea👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
i love the idea of god saying hey ill give the power to make worlds to anyone when they hit 5.So he makes a world of god who are gods of their world neat.
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Amazing book really love how he introudces the world instead of just foucaing on Earth the backstorys of the people you just come to love the book’s recommen reading this for sure.
I love the central idea of the novel, but especially the way of approaching it. Knowing that God exists and having the opportunity to be his successor ... and humanity decides to turn it into a game. Yep, could be real, no doubt.