摘要
On the walls of a hospital room, where the shadows of death intertwine with the destinies of those who still want to live, Dash Hale, who knows that he was near his end, laughs self-deprecatingly when he knows that the time was approaching of his death.
By the time he believed that he was at the end of it, his life blossoms similar to a Sakura tree but things are not the same as in his past life.
When he realizes that he is in a world where Karate and Kung Fu are more relevant than he thought since he recognized certain people who until before his death were fiction, Dash with his new opportunity to enjoy his life embarks on your most ardent desires.
At some point, everyone will fall before the dragon warrior who will grow in values and pride.
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I bow down to you for your writing speed and consistency.Like how do you write so much bro and still keep the pace of other novels.just your effort to write this much is enough to give 5 stars.
A great novel without a doubt, for me personally it is refreshing to finally see something good about Cobra Kai
Idk if it’s just me but the fanfic won’t save to my library and it keeps bugging when I try to read it it’s very upsetting
I would like to start off that I only read up until chapter 5, so take this review with a grain of salt, and I will be mostly focusing on the main character/writing quality. The two main issues I noticed right off the bat is the fact that the character adapted to his circumstances extremely quickly. and the pacing of the story is over the roof, and to be quite fair. It makes no sense. As a thirteen year old child people would expect them to be full of questions and have issues adapting, but instead we see him act like an adult and make rational and extremely unlike choices for a child. This makes no sense considering he just woke up and after an hour of him living his new life he already realized he is in the karate kid/cobra kai world. His interaction with his father is also forceful, but that might be because of his strained relationship with his parents. The pacing makes the unnatural adaptation of the child even worse, and adding another layer of doubt towards the novels progression. Since the pacing and character are so bad it is starting to affect the story development since chapter 5, and making the development less competent. basically we are rushing to build the house and forgot to reinforce the foundation, this will create plothole which leads to dissatisfaction. World Background is 5*, cuz its a fanfiction held inside an already popular series. Updates is 5*. lots of chapters and a really responsive author. good overall
Great story Kobro Kai, I like it, hope the main character isn't stupid and a bit OP, hopefully there won't be too much unnecessary drama. Thanks for the story
Let's go my warrior... Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Of all your books, this is the best of them all, the story is fluid and consistent, the writing style is the best so far, the characters seem real and not just secondary and the The protagonist's relationship with her friend is very cute (I wrote in the translator there may be errors)
Author, you’re an awesome guy and I applaud you for that. Very understanding person I must say, I think this novel has the potential to be popular even though it may not be my most favorite novel. I’ll support you no matter what!
You shouldn't worry about not having seen all of Cobra Kai, just the first season is more than enough. What can I say about this novel? It is perfect, everything one would like to read after watching Cobra Kai or Karate Kid
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There are very few Cobra Kai novels and even fewer good ones, but this novel does an incredible job with the story and each chapter is fantastic to read.
I must make sure that the crows have their stars for next year. Plus, it's looking very interesting at the minute and could develop into an excellent story. There are some hiccups with how the MC occasionally addresses himself, such as saying he instead of I, minor things really.
Hola hermano, apenas me voy a leer esta novela pero aún así le hice una portada jaja, espero te guste, como no la he leído intenté hacerla parecida a la actual, ojalá te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo [img=strong]
I already finished reading it, this is the best and only Cobra Kai fanfic I have ever read, there are almost no grammatical errors, english is my second language so i don't know about some words. Favorite word: your victory is my victory.⊂(◉‿◉)つ The character Dash had his moment of weakness and by having a second chance he was able to have the willpower to continue evolving as a human, changing the people around him for the better, this makes him a well-built character in my opinion. ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Thank you very much author for writing this work of art. This is the first fanfic I've read of yours and I'll definitely check out your other stories. ( ╹▽╹ )
Finally!! A cobra kai fanfic! I don’t care if it’s bad or not, its an automatic 5 stars for me