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摘要
John Wodwick Alver died and then reincarnated in a magic world as the King of All Bijuu and King Of The Tree Of All. He is also the Progenitor Of All Chakra, and the only Being that can easily surpass The existence that Beyond All.
Warning
MC is ridiculously overpowered, has an abnormal mindset and logic, has a light view of life, death is a trivial matter to him, is kind but ruthless, hates planning much, and has a ridiculous harem.
I am only a newbie writer and can't speak English very well and only rely on Grammarly for grammar and spelling corrections.
This novel is only my hobby and my entertainment.
by the way all the picture that I posted are not mine I all get them in Pinterest and google.
Thank you for reading and good day.
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well the writing is there but it becomes really boring because he serounds himself with nothing but op people in the beginning like he has Madara, sintama,the 7 deadly sins and so on. all that right at the beginning and the mc goal is to make a store in every multiverse don't know why because he can make all the money he wants and never be broke just a lot of pointless things he doing in the story
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I am aware that the authors are people with free time but come on, it does not cost anything to put a little effort the story is ruined in the third chapter the mc is so gifted that it is stupid that he tries to live with a kiosk for the emptiness of his existence
Another story ruined by your mc op the guy is so powerful you can't make a story out of him so he just goes from one store. Another story ruined by your mc op the guy is so powerful you can't make a story out of him so he just goes from one store
very 1 dimensional that's literally it guy dies becomes op qnd sets up a shop collecting harem member no character development yet not my cup of tea
Hi my name is Charlie and I like your stories and i have an idea can you do traveling across all existence with naruto system. The main character John has systems, and one of the systems, and one of the systems is the creation bijuu from which he received from God
How OP do you want to make the MC? Author: Yes. ......................... .... ............... .................. .........................
Hello I have a idea of new book you can do Reborn in a magical world with the Naruto system John Alver system bijuu creation
I like this novel, the Mc is so strong making the novel into a slice of life genre
I love this novel plz don’ t stop writing this plz 💙 And keep the good work 💯 Never give up ✍🏾
I‘m really look forward to this story. It’s premise is quite interesting. I enjoyed the chapters you wrote so far.
i thought this would be a classic "in danmachi with naruto's powers" sort of deal, but it is one of those storys where mc is beyond beyond omnipotent from the get go and just does whatever, nothing against those that enjoy this sort of thing but it realy ain't my cup of tea