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Is the American Dream just an illusion?
Bayo, an outsider with a sharp mind, is thrust into the complex reality of American life. Here, ideals clash with harsh realities, and survival hinges on navigating a world of power struggles and hidden agendas. Bayo's perspective challenges the status quo, forcing him to confront societal injustices and question the very essence of the American Dream. Will his fight for eternal freedom shield him or lead him down a dangerous path?
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Disclaimer
This story is a blend of history and imagination. While I've approached the time period of 1947-1950s with respect, I've also taken creative liberties to craft a compelling narrative. Names, actions, and even some cultural references are fictionalized for storytelling purposes.
Think of it as a tribute to Yoruba culture, not a strict historical account. My aim is to spark interest and understanding, not mislead.
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Just by the name! I am very proud and wish this book gets a lot of traffic! Go Bayo
Overall Plot and the foundation of this story is great. I'll recommend it for anyone who enjoys niche trope. Everyone can enjoy it but I believe Africans and Americans will enjoy it tbe most as it is directly speaking to them.
You get 5 stars just for being unique and actually good writing and interesting 👍
The story development is a bit slower as compared to other fast pace stories here. The author have literally been dealing with the same sets of characters for chapter 1 - 78. The writing quality, I have no complaints. The characters and world are all fleshed out that the details are frightening. However, I wish the story would move forward faster a bit. Again I've seen users and even the author hint on chapter and paragraph comment sections and sub comment of reviews that the story is niche. Whilst this is true, it doesn't mean it's not passable or readable. Every story is for entertainment, information and education. And there are variety of those stories in this great platform, ranging from history and urban. So whether the author have massive readership or not, he should respect his work and those reading it. There is no point complaining over trivial things. I don't want to be disappointed here.
Alright. I've read long enough to feel that my review should be valid. This book is traditional and cultural. The writing quality is great but the plot, I feel is not for everyone. But if you're into magical realism and supernatural elements attached to academia, then you may love it. Other than this juice not being for everyone, the author had done a great job...
To start, I really have nothing to nitpick except the cultural exclusivity of the book, including language. It marvels me that the author could seamless integreat languages. It wasn't much at first, but... But I'm not saying I dislike this, it's the authors creativity and it's not easy standing out. I want to say the author has chosen his audience. It's a good book but don't delusion yourself like he's writing it for everyone. Even the author seem to know this.
After reading so much I can only say it's a nice read... keep up the good work, author
It's got this cool African and American vibe, but honestly, anyone can dig it. The themes are universal. The world-building is dope - it's like magical realism meets history in a real-world setting. The author's got skills, painting vivid pictures that suck you right in. What's really awesome is how he'd woven the supernatural stuff into the plot. It's not just tacked on, it's integral to the story. You've got the physical world and the spiritual world vibing together.
After going toe to toe with the author , I must say this novel doesn't disappoint me. It's so good, so real and so alive. And the Author's, incorporation of multilingual and still keping it tidy is so so good... Keep this good work for me...
Shameless Author's review. This review is motivation for myself and Insight for my readers. Dear readers, I'm excited to share with you the premise and key elements of my novel, "Can You Really Survive In America?" (CYRSIA). As an author, I believe in the power of storytelling to introduce readers to new cultures and mythologies while exploring contemporary challenges. This review aims to give you an overview of the story and help you decide if it's the right fit for your reading preferences. $$Premise and Core Concept At its heart, CYRSIA revolves around Bayo and his journey in America, intertwined the orishas (Yoruba spirits or gods) with the mystical presence of his ancient self, Enigma X. The concept of Bayo's ancient self is first introduced in Chapter 57, initially serving as an assistant to Bayo. As the story progresses, Enigma X's role deepens: - After gifting Bayo a grimoire, Enigma X's backstory and details begin to materialize. - Chapter 104 marks a significant turning point, unveiling crucial insights about Enigma X. - Following this revelation, Enigma X's arc becomes more prominent in the narrative. Both supernatural and natural challenges Bayo faces, including his Harvard experience, are intricately tied to Enigma X's existence. Enigma X plays a unique role in Yoruba mythology as the god of trial and tribulation (a creative adaptation for the story's purposes). His power lies in absorbing or copying other orishas' abilities after passing their trials and tests. Born weak, Enigma X evolves into a formidable entity, reincarnating multiple times to face various challenges (reincarnation is not the main theme and I didn't focus my attention there.) $$Plot and Character Dynamics The story primarily focuses on Bayo's trials in America, which are orchestrated by Esu, the trickster god. Everything in Bayo's life, even before his birth, is part of Esu's complex test. The relationship between Esu and Bayo adds layers of intrigue to the narrative, blending modern-day struggles with ancient mythological trials. Readers will encounter a diverse cast of characters from various nations and backgrounds. These individuals, each with their own goals and motivations, become entangled in Bayo's journey. Be prepared for unexpected alliances and potential betrayals as the story unfolds, reflecting the complexities of survival in America. $$Cultural Elements and Language As an author, I've endeavored to introduce readers to Yoruba culture and mythology while exploring the challenges of adapting to life in America. The novel features multiple languages, primarily Yoruba, with some Arabic and other African languages, reflecting the diverse linguistic landscape of the protagonist's experience. To enhance readability, I've included translations: - In earlier chapters (1-40), translations are contextually explained. - From chapter 52 onwards, translations are provided in brackets. - A consistent glossary is maintained after the first 52 chapters. $$A Note on Authenticity While I'm not of Yoruba descent, I've done my best to represent the culture respectfully while also portraying the American experience. The initial chapters benefited from input by native Yoruba speakers. Due to the nature of serialized writing, later chapters rely more heavily on research and translation tools. I welcome feedback from readers more familiar with the cultures represented to help improve authenticity. ## What to Expect CYRSIA is not a conventional webnovel. It's a unique blend of mythology, contemporary challenges, and cultural exploration, all set against the backdrop of the American experience. The title "Can You Really Survive In America?" encapsulates the core question the narrative explores through Bayo's journey. While I initially planned numerous plot points, I may streamline some to ensure a satisfying and timely conclusion to the story. Expect a narrative that bridges ancient lore with modern challenges, offering insights into both Yoruba mythology and the complexities of navigating life in America. I invite you to embark on this journey with Bayo and Enigma X. If you're intrigued by new mythologies, complex characters, and a story that questions the nature of survival in a new land, CYRSIA might be the perfect read for you. Thank you for your interest and support. Happy reading!