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Ken a multitalented businessman and scientist transmigrated into Naruto's body when Naruto was severely injured then their soul and memories fused together. As Ken's soul was stronger and powerful then Naruto his most of the characteristics remains and a new being gets born.
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Why are you posting the same fan fic? ............................................ ............................................ ............................................
Is this a copy after the other one or something??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?;?;?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! 140
Hello friend, I hope you keep getting chaps, and a doubt will be harem?-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Super light novel dommage qu'il ni a pas plus de chap regulier...............................................................,............................................................................
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espero que no se le olvide la etiqueta harem que es para lo que vengo realmente XD la historia me gusto en un principio pero como es un re make espero que no se abandone y no te olvides del otro fanfic del hermano gemelo de naruto porque tambien se espera
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1 star for everything, first writing quality is abysmal so many wrong word and sentences ex: following becomes flowing update is slow and story development is trash he just become an ass licker ex: sasuke just sent him to the hospital by burning him with his ninjutsu then sasuke stops going to academy then what do you think naruto did?? he's the one who go to uchiha to beg sasuke to go back to the academy, he fucking didn't need to go to that bastard after he burned him, what a loser naruto
All is good so far he still remember his not real naruto unlike other fanfic. Only problem so far is MC is not using kyubi for all the help it can do.
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is ithis novel not as same as bussiness man naruto waiting.....it already has 130 chapters...so here what is happening.......................................
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I approve of your godly existence you are a god or goddess idk the gender. I love that you upload a lot than most of the novels. Sorry I need to make this more that 140 words.
Great story development, nice background and characters. Extremely bad grammar and typos everywhere. Could do well if the chapters where edited better, if at all.
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100% Beter then older version of businessman naruto.[---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is a rewrite of Businessman Naruto which I wrote before and stopped after 130+ chapters. That story was interesting and all but there are some things I wanted to change but at that place, it was quite impossible to do so I decided to start a new and try my best not to do the same mistake again. This one is indeed a Harem story but the way the MC gets the girls is quite reasonable so I think you will not be dissatisfied because of more than 1 woman as MC woman. So don't get negative without reading properly. Also, the writing quality might not be that good for some peoples as I don't reread the chapter after I am done writing because if I do I will have to update even shorter chapter then I update because if the lake of time. Anyway if you read I am sure you will like the overall story. Thanks anyway.
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