摘要
Alexander Sebastian had transmigrated to a world where everyone could awaken a Planet. The larger the Planet, the higher the Origin Energy, and the stronger the Civilization.
Some people made theirs with Qi to create a Martial Arts Civilization, everyone on the Planet was a Martial Arts practitioner.
Some people made theirs with Magic to create a Magical Civilization, everyone on the Planet was a Mage.
Some people made their with Spiritual Energy to create an Immortal Civilization, everyone on the Planet was an Immortal Cultivator.
Everyone was trying their best to construct all sorts of extraordinary planets. Sebastian, on the other hand, used his memories from his previous life to create a technological civilization!
“Your Star Destroyer directly pierced through the opponent’s planet, and the opponent bowed their head.”
“Your two-way foil turned the opponent’s planet into a piece of paper, and you frightened them.”
This story uses technology to break through all sorts of Supernatural Civilizations.
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This is a translation. The Original Title is: 人人一颗星球：开局打造科技文明
And sorry, my English is average, so forgive me if there is a mistake. The later chapter will have better quality.
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ok I have read somewhat to 20 chapter's but I think I have one thing to say. we all know it's a translation but please edit some names because it can be hard to remember or they are all over the place how similar they are. and world background so far is good.
At the moment of this review, I read until chapter 100. my opinion is very simple: a interesting story butchered by a horrible machine translation. just to be clear, the translation is: garbage, trash, horrible, disgusting, amusing, ridiculous, poetry. the amount of comments in the first few chapters is ok, but after 50 almost everyone dropped this novel. it doesn't matter how good is the story, the translation is garbage.
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl. Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting. Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though. Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day. World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology? Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Sou brasileiro e nao sei ler em inglês, então to usando tradutor para ler essa magnífica obra, como também nao sei escrever em inglês, darei minha resenha em PT-BR mesmo, vle autor, obra incrível, bem diferente das usuais q tem extremo foco no prota e esquece do entorno
The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample. The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there. Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
I actually like this. It's got a good story, nice concept, and the MC is actually kinda aight. Definitely one of the best ones I've read, and it's not stuck behind a paywall once, so that's one more reason why I like this. Although, the chapter updates aren't consistent, I don't really think that's a big issue.
I have been following this story for a while and I love it. Please keep it up and don't drop.
this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense
A great story if you don't want to use your brain or question anything and just relax whilst reading repeating stories of the mc shocking everyone, then traveling to a higher "plane" and the repeating, just as I repeatedly said repeating. A little bit of fiction(around chapter 400), the story is slowing down (instead of there being a single battle which was like 1 chap long, I think the last 50 chaps were just one big battle in which new people just randomly join, without a real explanation) i mean like yeah you have the classical rail guns and robots but that's all the since fiction for now like I said not all too much fiction, our mc is just a stupid guy who just uses the system he was given once at the start to create a "perfect" world for life and then forgets it except for like three times when the mc actually had to decide something all the real thinking is done by the people of the world, which are actually not as intelligent as a boul of hot pizza but instead have the thought complexity of a 8 year old kid I think it's a great read to just shut your brain down and not think at all it's not perfect English but it's readable so yeah, that are my thoughts about this book
Amazing book. Read all chapters up to 444. This book encompasses many types of books in one. Some of which include magic, martial arts, beasts, and technology. The book also follows several plots like transmigrated to a territory and upgrading it over time, kingdom building from primitive to sci-fi, invasions of otherworldly creatures, and also inheritances of treasures or mighty figures. The book is great and I strongly recommend it.
overall it's good especially since this novel is free and doesn't require money to read
There was definitely a period around chapter 70 or so where the quality of the writing dropped tremendously and it was really difficult to read. but after powering through it was definitely worth it. It isn't the best story ever, but it was unique and very entertaining.
Fantastic work the Author . The world building is great and characters has consistent I genuinely enjoy the story .Keep up the good work.
Muy buena novela los ultimos cap un poco cortos pero me gusta una de las pocas historias que sigo con frecuencia lastima que este en esta plataforma cuesta mucho importarlas al programa que me lee las novelas
Very good story but it will be better if you use chat gpt so the reading can be better it also because of this that i don’t give more star for me if the translation is just a little better and we have more chapter per week it will be perfect but i want to thank you for the amazing job and also for free and it one favorite story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so far as of chapter 2 this is a great story can't what to see more.............................................................................................................................