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In a world where only 0.1% of males have a quirk Midoriya Izuku isn't quirkless. On his 14th birthday he woke up to
[The Quirk System Online]
first time writing a fan-fic criticism is appreciated, don't argue with the harem status though, that's just happening regardless, but please point out errors in my writing they annoy me too.
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Never have I encountered a fanfic that takes gender-bending further than this one. Normally not the biggest fan of gender-bend but it doesn't actually bother me in this case for some reason. I like the author's writing style, really hope this isn't dropped...
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This story is one of the few good stories where a system is in play. The system itself is constant in both attitude and personality, meanwhile the harem isn't the typical meet girl and get, it's more in-depth than that and is mostly just a funny side thing going on.
It's really good even though most of the hero became a heroine it really gives a new out look on BnH story plot sorry for the bad English and 140 character really
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Really great novel and surprisingly it has the rae mc with a personality author really is putting lot of effort but the update stability is very slow. Good novel has 3000 words per chapter approx plus story development and character development is good but still taking mineta out could be avoided as him being comic relief
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Very interesting story need more chap to enjoy If he have vermilion bird already then should make him have other 4 divine beast as well it will be really cool °~° I really like white tiger hahahaha
I have spent more than 5 hours today looking for good stories, and then I find this gem right when I'm going to stop for the day; and read all the stories I've collected. Perseverance is key, not just in the bedroom it seems.
It’s well done and you can do better but as everyone knows nobody is perfect so yeah even if there are a few errors this story is still amazing and also love the system mechanics I have a story as well with the gamer system and I’m still working out the system anyways
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This is one of the best fics I've read so far. 10/10 now, since I don't know how to write reviews I'm going to fill this with a random song translated from Spanish with google. And if you think I'm in love with you I think that's a fabrication, don't believe the rumors. because almost never nobody says that I am in love with you.
hope you can make more chapters other than that this story was great. the character were also well written and not much to change to make is better
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This is the first gender bender i liked so far. But the story removed todoroki hope the author will bring him /her to 1a to fill the 20 student mark and it would be funny if endevour is the one who is used because his wife couldn't surpass galmight and use endevour for his fire quirk so that her daughter could surpass gal might. 🤣🤣
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it's really good even though most of the hero became a heroine it really gives a new out look on BnH story plot sorry for the bad English and 140 character really
It is only 7 chapter.. And i already hooked.. For anyone that like harem novel but not the kind that "ah, i save you, lets fvck, i love you" type.. Go ahead read this.. He have unique system.. Mix a lot of system.. But the most important one is the gamer and dating sims.. lololol.. Ah and the chapter is long.. I think min 2k word per chapter? Anyway.. give it a try.. And for author.. good luck..