/ Anime & Comics / BLUE LOCK :THE GOAT
摘要
I always dreamed of becoming a football player
but I because I had a weak body I didn't but now that changed because now I got reincarnited in
blue lock with a system
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It's good for your first novel but it needs a hard fix on your grammar and more but it's a good novel no hate I like it it just needs a little fix
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this was amazing. w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w. keep up the good work. w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w w
look away am here to give my fanfic 5 stars