摘要
(Warning! This is a Dark novel)
FAMILY OR HUMANITY?
Elric's life completely changed as a fated stormy night ended up making him choose between his humanity or becoming a dragon - all with its dearest cost.
Accepting his new fate, He soon realized he has taken a bite of power more than he can chew.
A new world has been revealed and an unexpected journey to the world of the Elementals began as Elric tried to fix the mess he has made.
Along with meeting unexpected friends and enemies, Elric was forced to redefine his goals as he struggled his way up to the final form of evolution and to unite the mysterious world he once thought he knew.
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Elric is a simp. Elric will kill and die for females because of some pride. Elric also makes retarded decisions like trying to reason with a demon that’s there to kill them. Nothing else needs to be said. Read the first few chapters for yourself and find out.
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Hello, a filipino author here too! I actually couldn’t believe that you would put our mythical creatures here. It actually made me laugh. Was not expecting that. The story is good 😊 Keep it up! Sorry if i'm not good at giving reviews. 😅
This is really great who like evolution novels or novels where the MC openly has a hidden power. In general, Thanks for the chapterssssssss!!!!!!
Meh story is too scattered and random, story take age to happen (more than 20 chapter for a fight ?) and end up being ridiculous, would definitely not recommend
the mc is a simp and way too stupid.... everything is way too forced. too many plot holes. and bad grammar
Garbage. These characters aren't a single bit human. the author doesn't even try. Like, protagonist tries to save a girl, gets punted and nearly murdered by the girl he tried to save, and then again! he tries to save her, and she tries to kill him. this is a failure in writing on one of the basest levels imaginable.
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The book is pretty good, with decent ideas behind the story, however, in execution it comes out somewhat scattershot, with a fairly limited throughline and new concepts and "endgame" entities from the beginning. It doesnt take its time to establish anything, and unfortunately, whether it be due to the translator or the author if this isnt translated, the english is pretty broken, making certain lines somewhat nonsensical and others outright incorrect or very very different to comprehend. Again, great ideas behind the story, but the author needs more practice writing, and if he keeps going with the same quality of ideas behind his writing in future i look forward to his improvements greatly.
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It's not a happy story, so don't read it if you aren't happy with a lot of sad and depressing **** that doesn't suit a happy read. My opinion is that of a very grim grimdark, not what was advertised
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World background is nice. Character design is **** the mc is a huge simp. The start was ehhh okey, the plot armor is too much. I don't know how stable the uptades are so have a 5 star at that. Writing quality is nice but i have to be honest 3+1+1=4 got me good, my brain stopped working for a while then.
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I really like it. It's a really good story to me at least. Yeah, it might not be the best story but it's at least a good read if you're bored. It has it's flaws but doesn't every story?
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Thanks for reviewing my story and it is now my turn to review yours. The story is awesome. The title is enough to get your blood boiling. The beginning kind of reminded me of my unbelievable expectations of the world I had in my childhood. Sometimes you comment that you lack good English but I think it is very good. (At least better than mine.) I am sorry that I have to say something negative but you take a little bit too much time to complete an incident.
It better than I expected. The story is nice. I kind of feel bad for mc on how or what situation he in for his curiosity. Read it to find out. Overall the story 👍.
i read five episodes and still hadent progesed the story for mc to get ablities nothing but talking through 4 episodes i was looking for a good story not just talking through 99% of the story
Naive and plain stupid mc...............................................................................................................................
I’m not good at giving justifiable criticism or praise so I’ll just leave this smiley face here. :)