/ Anime & Comics / Black Clover - The Point System
摘要
Suzaku Kirin, a boy from Earth, was randomly transmigrated in a different world: A World of Magic
Before transmigrating, Suzaku was fortunate enough to have a 'Golden Finger' accompany him - The Point System.
[Congratulations, Suzaku! You have been selected as a transmigrator. After 10 seconds, you will be teleported to the 'Rebirth Void', where you will be able to view the system and select your choice of character]
[When choosing the character, you will be teleported near the character you have chosen]
Inspired by: One Piece World- Only I know The PLOT!
Warning: Due to a poll, MC will join Black Bulls. If you're one of those who drop the story or whatever for that kind of reason then feel free to not read this story.
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Overall a decent book at best, The low scoring is due to world background and story development. As of the part i dropped its just the typical canon stuff. Perhaps too quick to judge maybe but i knew the moment he started befriending Asta and Yuno that it was heading down the same path as every other Black clover fic ive seen, joining the Black bulls. It has become such a boring and overused outcome i wont even bother going further into the story. The system itself is also quite meh to me, the fact that the MC only leveled his physical stats through system points and not physical training because the author "never thought about that" is also a red flag its literally one of the most basic things.
Amazing black clover fanfiction. I am excited about what magic he is gonna get and about him becoming stronger and getting points
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To be honest, this fanfic is not very impressive - a typical cliché, where the system develops only at the expense of it, I also didn’t like how predictable and uninteresting everything was written and the updating of chapters is very slow and the chapters are short. The only thing I liked was the main character's grimoire and that's all
This is an almost flawless novel. The worst defect in my opinion is the system. Other than the system, this novel is almost perfect.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is the first black clover fan fiction I have read that doesn't have abysmal grammar. The other ones spell something incorrectly every 5 words.
Till chapter 10 I loved it. Hope it maintains and I l really hope it continues as well🐥🦭🐥🦭🐥🐥🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🐥🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🦭🤔🥺❣️🦭🥴❣️😅🐥🥺🤔🥴🥺🤔❤️🥺🤔❤️🥺🤔❤️🥺🦭❤️❤️❤️❤️🥴🥺🤔❤️❣️❤️❤️
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5 stars for being a fic ⚫🍀 ==================================================================================================================================================================
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great start..............................................................................................................................................
Author 5 star review. Before I say anything, this fic was influenced by a ff called 'In One Piece- Only I know the PLOT' (something along those lines). Feel free to ask any questions on this review, I'll reply to them as soon as i can and to the best of my ability