摘要
The story has been re-written and posted on Royal Road only
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/95733/hivemind-beyond-the-veil
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I'm really excited about the development of this novel! I've only read the first three chapters, but already I'm hooked. The world the author has created is amazing, full of magic and adventure. The characters are really interesting, and the story is full of surprises. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and find out what happens next. Bookmarked and eagerly anticipating the release of more chapters.
It looks the character will undergo a massive transformation, which makes me curious about the nature of this change. More details could be added to flesh out the story and the character of Izin. I wonderi about the powers that Izin has tapped into, and what their purpose might be. This has great potential for a fantasy or supernatural story, but I think it needs more development to fully engage the readers.
This book is pretty interesting. A prince's life and quite exciting plots await. The world-building and the mc development all are fascinating. The writing style is awesome, like the way the author has written each and every details. It quite different and easy flowing. Great author, keep it up!
Amazing beginning...I loved the way the MC began his journey. It is a world of magic and mystery - just the kind of story I love. It's still too early to say how the story will turn out to be, Keep writing author!! Amazing story!!
Just another shameless author hoping the masses will read the novel to any about to read the novel will have slow update because I prefer 700-1000 words