摘要
A mysterious beast in an alley and a strange letter from a mystical being propel Johan to the stage of gods and their matters.
Violence, love, magic, time travel, hot girls and many mysteries to be solved ...
Follow Johan as he is put in situations where he is forced to leave everyday responsibilities and stand against gods.
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When you say "hot girls", is it gonna be raunchy? Harem? No harem? Mature situations, in my opinion, make the novel better. I just want to understand this point before jumping into a novel.
I really like where this novel is going, but it needs more chapters to accurately judge it. Please please keep writing ♥ I think it really has potential
Wow, just wow man. So realistic. Them emotions so real! For the first time I felt like "living in the novel" as I read it. The good and the bad, the anger and the hope. What kind of life have you lived, RatTurtle, for being able to write such a story? The start of the novel is slow. I feel like the prologue is just over, and the first chapter is starting. But I like it this way.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Good book. Nice mix of characters. I like how the MC builds up from the bottom and keeps moving up and developing himself despite discouragement. Reminds me a bit of Naruto. Except this dude has a family.
Keep going, I think that the backgrounds and relations between the characters can use some additional work, but I like where it is going. I'll give you tips if I see anything of note. Good book! Keep it up!
Another book! I love your writing style, brings a smile to my face every time. I especially like Athyne and Rey, they are my favorite characters in this book.
Keep going bud! I like the consistency with which you update this novel. It is going well! It reminds me a little of mix between Harry Potter and the Rocky movies. Its a good weekend read. Can't wait to see the completed version after you edit it.
Looking good! It is nice to see that your novel got featured on Webnovel's front page. I like the turn of events it has taken. Here is a good review for Christmas! Merry Christmas Mr Turtle!
The book seems to be fun. In fact I like the turn it is taking more than your first novel. It seems comical in some cases, and that is a writing style that I enjoy very much!
This novel is a different beast from my previous novel. While in my first book, 'Domino the First Super Villain' I focused on situations that exaggerated the hypocrisies in our world, while portraying it in an imaginary but not so supernatural alternative world. This novel focuses on fantasy, magic, hot girls, violence and everything the previous novel was not. It will take your imagination on a trip that it will never forget. Enjoy. :)