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摘要
Wonder what happens Avatar from the Last Airbender comes to One Piece world............
NEVER!! NOW we have it ;)
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* Only fan fiction.
* Update if it's not busy.
* My grammar isn't good because English isn't my pure language, I'm sorry
read the first 3 chapters and comment
let me know
Disclaimer I do not own any character or world of ONE PIECE and concept.
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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The idea seem fine and I hope the story goes well We got the fire elements control in our mc so if he's not smart enough to learn how to freeze water and walk on it then he's plain retarded and you should stop writing then and there btw
The writer hates his mc so much that the first thing the writer does is make the mc permanently handicaped ... then he dumps the mc in east blue where he is basically starving to death ... the handicap makes it so he cant run btw ...