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摘要
Adam Coakley an normal teen to people standards, he drinks,party's,hangs with friends all normal teen stuff but hes an other side and that is he's scared,has anxiety and he likes anime/manga, star wars etc.
but what will happen to him when dies meets god gets wishes and a universe of his choosing
will he become an emperor and conquer worlds or will live he the free life adventuring the universe
(disclaimer) i don't own star wars obviously this is just my fantasy and dream also there might be sexual scenes depends how well i write them.
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author sama this is so far quite great. the grammar and spelling is on point the gender is not being mixed up like most novels. so i have high hopes. also will you bring in the kotor 2 ravager? and modify it so the damage is just appearance wise? since who wouldnt freak out with a ship that looks like its been through hell take almost no damage and opens fire on you?
What I didn't like: 1) Very MC, there is no sane achievement of power. 2) The world is faded, everything revolves around MC, four girls are so for the background (not disclosed), his kingdom likewise does not take part in his life, no events happen that it is that it is not. 3) The work is written as if torn, as if the author is jumping like a kangaroo from thought to thought. 4) The motivation of the hero is not clear, what he wants and what to achieve, what goals he pursues, just as the hero himself is not formed, we do not know anything about him in fact. 5) The battles of both the protagonist and space, ground-based are very unworked, do not keep you in tension and there is no desire to know how the confrontation will unfold. Nagging: 1) A very strong obsession with technology and clones of the forces of the republic, there is no creativity. 2) It is annoying every time when another clone is mentioned, you write in what phase it is dressed. 3) Where did Plokun go when, was going to find out from where there was a surge of strength... What I liked: 1) The choice of the universe for the work.
Keep it up I love the book it’s amazing Please don’t drop the book is to great for that You should hook him up with padme that would be awesome and allow him to take a padawan during the clone wars
Writing quality is good, updates too average pacing story development is quite normal so many plot holes Edgy mc that makes the opposite sex blush for him a king that likes to bow to other monarchs an mc that shows bouts of immaturity for a thousands of year old force user
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Hi! It's a very interesting idea. I give four scores, the reason is the low number of chapters. THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!
Seven stupid wishes "granted'₹" Phk , The guy have anxiety, was not stated why I put my hand in the tale of demon and gods have affinity to the world of A Returner magic should be special to the point like they have feelings or basically being able to get a good idea of what I want to do with the fact that I am giving you a hard time with you and your family and friends with you and your family to be in the tale of demon and gods.. I JUST KEPT PRESSING THE WORDS THAT CAME IN THE SUGGESTION BOX😂
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All in all it is a very good fan fic. I just wish there were faster updates because i really love reading this story. Anyway i hope you do not drop this.
This is honestly one of the best book that I've had read in webnovel, but there are a few grammar problems, but other than that it's pretty good.........
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Really bad fanfic. Mc trained for 8000 years in all forms and abilities of the force. Plus tactics and politics yet hes an absolute idiot. Nothing even matters since author forgets what he writes the next paragraph anyways. Trash fic
This story is one big unimaginative mess. No plot just forced cannon. CoContinuity is sorely lacking and the author seems to write ”inthe moment” with no forethought for what has been written.
How are you doing? Please come back i was really enjoying this story :(. Hope all is well.
MC is a king but bow's to others. MC spent at least 300 years or more on every subject but MC fails at the most basic stuff! for example first life plant found MC learns of a war between two different races which by the way have no air craft of any kind!!!!! I fail to see that the MC has really train at anything because bombing from the sky an within hours MC should have destroyed 90% if not 100% of the enemy. What does MC do? land troops on ground to fight it out, also run into the enemy himself of 200,000. Not king like or emperor like at all.
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Too overpowered, it's like playing video games with unlimited health and wealth, you enjoy for a moment but then get bored due to being invincible. I like overpowered protagonist but this was too much. I gave 5 stars because it takes creativity even to write any story.
I have a few problems with this fanfics, and their source is the wishes. He only needed 3 wishes. 4 if you add personalized race and appearance. The system, the world to be king of, the unlimited amount of ressources and blueprints. -Systems are usually used to help the protagonist grow in strenght and skills, or provide a special ability because of their lack of power. Here, the system is near useless. With the system he could have learned the force arts, and everything else like marksmanship, piloting, engineering. -With the ressources and blueprints he could have made his own clone army generator and starforge. -With the planet and its civilization, he could have conquered it, recruiting and training his 4 pretty servants along the way, and become king. His growth has taken 2-4 chapters. It doesn’t even feel like those 5000 years of training and learning were a big deal. Just a waste of time. Having so many things he can customize, being his own superpower different from Palpatine Empire and the republic/resistance, everything he gets is just a copy of what Palpatine would have. Waste of his knowledge in engineering. His own home world is barely described, nothing of his work as king (territory management). It would gave been so much better with at least 10-15 chapters to sum up his rise to power, improving his planet and building his military (like starting at 17yo, finishing at 20yo). Then move to the other planets.