摘要
"Since you couldn't be an immortal, then practice martial arts.
With martial arts, you could fight with the immortals.
Beginning as a martial arts cultivator, the most important thing was to cultivate. Soon you'd be slaying immortals.
An Immortal was a man on the mountain!
A martial artist was a man of the men!
Step by step, I, Zhou You, will one day go up to the top of the mountains, to be the person standing tallest!"
Panel talent acquisition
Talent =Root and Bone + Qualification + Enlightenment =
Cultivation speed + martial arts compatibility + full level of Enlightenment, a real king in the making!
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-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
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7評論
- 翻譯品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
There are a lot of martial arts stories as well as cultivation stories. There are even many that have both. Here we have another one of those stories with both cultivation as well as martial arts. Even the 100% comprehension within the same strata of story is not uncommon. One major difference is that the story is told in a way that makes sense. First off it is not confusing with a bunch of jumping around and seemingly unconnected events. Instead we have a natural progression of events based on the MC's life. The only case of it being different is him taking an unknown plunge and seeking out martial arts in the beginning. At this point he just reincarnated and had few methods to go forward. He ended up pawning his only major asset to acquire funds to join a dojo and practice it's martial art. This is an all in move that can only be explained by him just having reincarnated. The story else-wise is just a natural progression of rather realistic events. The MC gained a certain amount of strength and confidence and is running low on funds, so he decides to collect on debts that are owed to his body's previous occupant. The MC acquires a interface that supports his practice as well as a very complete comprehension of martial techniques. From here the MC seeks out more techniques and works hard to develop each to fully support his growth. It fully makes sense that he spends his time by being stable. He also finds another occupation to take up the rest of his time. At that point he is probably only able to practice 2-3 hours a day so the rest of his time is used in learning his side occupation. Overall a good story with a rather realistic flow of events. It was mentioned that it is a dropped story, but even still it is worth reading. We have a bunch of stories that Webnovel introduces and offers 40 chapters of but only about a tenth of them actually make it to translation status. Some are enjoyable even if they are never going to go beyond the 40 chapters. I will just think of this one in a similar way. Also people can take inspiration from this one as it is actually pretty well done.
Honestly it's pretty cool. I'm generally a fan of the "martial artist in a world of cultivators" dynamic, and I like how it was done here.
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