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摘要
I stopped with that book. I found it too boring so I wrote another more interesting book.
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寫檢討
Sorry everyone, I have to write chapter 130 to start privilege again. From now, the privilege will forever be 18 coins.
It's a good read, though I feel the writer has failed when it comes to the world background, it's explained very little, and the novel could be enriched with more depth in that regard. Everything else seems pretty good.
hello, im probably not that good at giving reviews and anyway i don't know what has gotten to me. i enjoyed the story a lot. the progress, character, and plot. it's just a pity that my coins were lacking and cant read the other's and only got the privilege to u unlock 5 chapter in advance. anyway i will probably get them later, and this is my second time giving review so pls forgive me for my lacking review. ps: although i don't know you, good luck and have a good day
I have seen many novels about cultivation but I have not seen them clearly explain its origin. I hope this story can show more clearly what is called cultivation.
Great novel, love a “ beginning of cultivation “ type story . Keep up the Great work !!
I have already prepared the main content so the story will not be abandoned. It's just that implementing it is a bit difficult so maybe there are some periods where I write quite slowly so sorry for that.