/ Anime & Comics / Becoming the Hokage in the beginning
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Mc with a mission on his shoulder went to Naruto world and took over the body of Sarutobi Hiruzen just before the death of Tobirama Senju. As Hiruzen became the Kage of his village, his mission forced him to find a quick way to make him and subordinates stronger in order to fight against his future enemy. So, using one of his cheats, Hiruzen opened spatial passage leading to One piece world and took all the Konoha ninjas there in order to make them stronger.
Hiruzen resurrected the legendary figures and created the Akatsuki organization to reach his goal. He even sent ninjas to infiltrate the world government and other four major villages to control those superpowers from inside.
After decades of hard work and challenges, Hiruzen was finally successful in conquering both worlds and complete his mission and managed to go to the place he always desired. But this time he didn't go there alone, he brought along those wives that he married during his mission in those two worlds with him as well.
***⚠ Warning⚠***
#If you want the story to be perfect, this is not for you since I am a new writer.
#This fanfiction contains harem and some lemon from time to time. If you have any problem with these or you can't stand when there is a big age gap between partners, then you should leave right now instead of wasting your time here.
#Overall, if you are a person who doesn't like something as long as it goes against your worldview, then please leave. I am literally tired of those guys who likes to give low reviews just because they don't like something and judge the whole ff only based on that particular part.
By the way, I am posting this ff on both webnovel and scribblehub.
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i abandoned it in chapter 2, he gets a role that as long as he puts anyone's name (as long as she is alive), he will receive all his abilities, he keeps thinking only about tobirama and madara, and in the end he chooses tobirama . PS: THE ONLY CONDITION WAS THE PERSON TO BE ALIVE, HE WENT THERE AND LIMITED THE MC'S THOUGHT IN 2 CHARACTERS (A TOTAL STUPIDITY OF THE AUTHOR). (I'M USING GOOGLE TRANSLATOR SORRY IF IT'S WEIRD)
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My warning for new readers is that there is a lot of BS in this. I understand what the author was trying to do in the introduction but the execution was just plain awful. The timeline is messed up. And political marriage needs a bit more convincing.
do wanna see a dude chase after girls the have a generational gap and be proud about it here's ur story l , wanna see ash Ketchum catch every girl that move regard if his old enough to be there Grandpa u have a story .( author if I find this comment deleted than my speculation of u being a pedo is correct
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Amazing concept for a story. The charctar development is great and the power level are well thought out many people usually make konoha weak during its foundation forgetting that many people from the warring period are alive and the senju and uchiha are at their peak The world background is also stable and without weird stuff forcibly put into the world so far im looking forward to see the development
all in all a good read with a new concept , i also realized some things related to islam and tbh it's interesting that you made the prologue out of it cuz this is the first ... i think ? and the MC is not dump and a pushover so it's good cuz i guess ... the only problem is that it's a little fast paced and there are not many character screens like for example he met luffy but there was not any interactions between them , you just time skipped that scene and some others .
After reading the synopsis I think the fic has potential. Never seen an hiruzen si fic, so it's a first for me. Also I see some idiots spamming low reviews just caz it's harem. So......
Ok, I listened to the author about the unfair assessment. And I will appreciate the work. I'm still unhappy with the harem sheet and recommend removing it, otherwise there will be the same problems as with me.
I HATE HAREM! BUT I like how MC transmigates into Hiruzen Sarutobi. I like how it's pre cannon and set at the beginning of when he becomes Hokage. But seriously though there's not many Hiruzen Sarutobi fanfictions set at this time or at the beginning when Konoha was established (if there is please share). Anyways can't wait for further development of the village and the exploration of One Piece world. Can't wait for the next update.
My friend introduced me to this story, he recommended me to read this awesome story. I am really glad that he did introduced me to this amazing story. i really loved it. One of the best fan-fiction i have ever read.[img=recommend]👌much love.💜💗.
This story deserves more rating, don't be swayed by negative reviews, this story is worth it. Hopefully one day the author will finish it .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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woo está increíble jaja , es la primera historia que leo en donde el protagonista es sarutobi hiruzen , además tiene un comienzo de 10 , ya que es cuándo asume el puesto de tercer hokage y lo mejor es que es harém jaja
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Книга мне очень сильно понравилась жаль что автор ее забросил хоть в ней и были некоторые моменты что мне не нравились в целом книга очень хороша
This ff is very good, keep up your beautiful work. update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
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