摘要
Combination of smexy characters in a world of fantasy, each having their own screen time from any of my books (BaeVida's books) strictly.
It would feature matured contents not suitable for younger generation.
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Love the story line, looking forward to enjoying this novel. You have my thumbs up author. But please write more. I need update splease. Thank you
Cool... Female Lead... Definitely Cool... First of all this is my second or third time reading a female lead.. but now I'm started to think female leads are way cooler.. I don't know maybe it's because I'm bored of reading male lead or something ... in them... everything is like it's obviously going to happen but female leads are like... "hmmmm... cool... kick his a**".... So about this work, it's interesting you have a princess and her family murder case and then [spoiler. Nahh..go read it yourself and find out].. Secondly about the grammatical errors and all... there are but not that many to break your flow of reading...you can enjoy it. Lastly.. it's a good work... everyone should try it... and thanks author for his hard work.
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough. Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.
I am completely fascinated by the story specially the author descriptive of surrounding and the world setting keep up the good work . The story plot is one more redeeming point which O liked the most
The novel is very good and needs more readers, the grammar is also very good, I recommend many people to read it 🔥 🔥 🔥.....................
I love the way the father-daughter bond was presented in the first chapter, it was really sweet. The Princess is a really strong character physically and emotionally. It's great to see that she has a fun and childish side too! This is truly a deep and fascinating story. Please keep up the brilliant work Author!
The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed. I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself) " On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about. That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!" Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂 I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
Seems nice, female lead is strong-willed. Very rare in your plot seems most other novels are like "I went back 300 years ago just to know the past". While yours be like ey, let's smack down to 8 years. Anyway this is good. Nothing much to say, well done Tada. (っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ
Good story line but please update some more because I'm really bored in quarantine and I like this book so I might forget about it if it doesnt update anymore
This novel is pretty good, I haven’t found many problems. The flow and writing style is pretty amazing, I am not really a fan of female lead books. But for my friend I’ll read it. Keep up the good work 👍
Hello my lovely readers.... Who missed me?...... Hahahahaha, sorry for the update starvation.... Being busy with other things and I really needed the encouragements from you guys. It help writers to get feedback from their readers. So it would be nice if you guys show support. Well would try and update three chapters this week. Thank you for reading
Would really love an update author....... Thank you for your writing. I know its no easy. Readers come and enjoy the dragon queen. And motivate our author. More votes, comments, reviews and add to ur library. Don't just read and go.
Job well done so far! Eagerly waiting for more updates... The story flow is smooth and the characters are designed well. This novel has great potential! Good work author! Cheers!! Happy writing!