摘要
Jörmungandr; the World Serpent.
A creature of Norse mythology, the serpent who would eat itself until it found freedom—then the world would be destroyed by it.
To release him from his slumber was suicide.
"Hey, World Serpent. Aren't you tired?"
They're awake—and in a place they never knew existed.
"...Humans are odd..."
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Genuinly Recomend this book truely is enjoyable and i shall break it up for you: Plot devolpment: The way the plot is always developing in every single chapter makes sure it never feels dull like many other books youve read, yet it happens slow enough to where you wouldnt feel overwhelmed or, lost, making the story feel rushed and icky. Not to menaion the isage of the multiple leads to better contribute to the world building Characters: now the first thing i have to say about the cast; is that its very vibrent. the characters really are lively enough to get invested in and some of them are just straight GOLD (lookin at you Fenrir) Updating stability: You can see it says 4/week as of now; the author cares about the story i cant say it will always be this much, but I can say that you will be seeing this story Come together Wrighting Quality: there isnt much to say here but that ever since chapter obe the wrighting has felt BUTTERY SMOOTH ,and that the author is still inproving Graduely. weather you think you think its worth your time or not doesnt matter, you should and you WILL my brothers and sisters if you disagree you are wrong but fear not their is still hooe for you, Jörmungandr will whip you into shape. All jokes aside i really do enjoy the book and i think its worth a shot.
I love storys like this one and this one seems really interesting with how you made it the factions the gods the sibling relationship very nice but I'm dropping it not because I don't like it but because I simply don't like androgynous looking characters I can't relate to them but I'm sure others can and are happy with that part of the story and if anyone reads this and likes that kind of main character then give it a read
So... thanks for the 100k+ view guys! I...never thought this random little idea I had could get so... big. （*゜ー゜*） Like... surely it wasn't that unique...? (; °Д°) But, even so, I'm really grateful for all the comments, stones, support, jokes... It's been really fun despite not being so long. (/ω＼*)……… (/ω•＼*) I hope I will be able to develop the story in a way that's fun for you guys as much as it is for me, while all of us go on Jörmungandr's journey with him and his Patronage. If I get bad at everything, tell me immediately--I'll take your advice to heart! ( •̀ ω •́ )✧ Have a good day/night everyone! And thank you for sticking with me for now--I hope to be with y'all for a long time!
I'm using a different style of writing, so the chapters will be shorter and what not, but I hope you enjoy and vote for the story that I'm making.