摘要
The world of Avatar is about to see a change that will shake it to its foundations. Will the avatar be able to bring balance back to the world or will the Tower change its very foundations.
A man from our world is transported to the world of avatar being given command of his own tower bringing the wonderous world of classes and magic to his new world.
Please keep comments civil but criticism is welcome
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I do not own the Avatar the last Airbender or any of its characters this is a fan fiction*
I do not own the cover image of the owner wants me to take it down feel free to contact me and I will*
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AUTHOR AFTER READING ALL 15 CHAPTER THE STORY IS A+ FOR FUN.author just do not FxUxCxK UP AND QUIT AND WASTE MY TIME AND DESTROY MY FUN DREAM...AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS TO BE MULTIVERSE OR GIVE THE MC THE POWER TO SUMMON OTHER CHARACTERS OR THINGS FROM OTHER WORLDS LIKE MASS EFFECT,, ARE GIRLS LIKE HER GHISLAINE FROM MUSHOKU TENSEI ANIME
hello author here. just wanted to add a review. if you have the time please leave one it would be very helpful for future chapters.
AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS MORE, MODERN TECHNOLOGY..CAN THE MC GET A SKILL FOR ONLY SUMMON TECHNOLOGY LIKE MECHA AND OTHER THINGS LIKE WARSHIPS OR SPACE SHIPS......................................................................................................
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Al principio cuando la comencé a leer me molestaron varias cosas, en parte porque ese día había estado buscando nuevas historias y terminé encontrando basura, eso hizo que cuestionara muchas cosas algo extrañas que sucedieron, pero cuando me tomé el tiempo de leerla sin perjuicios, descubrí que es una historia muy interesante, la creación de la torre no es tan engorrosa como en otras novelas, pero aún mantiene la coherencia en lo que ofrece la torre a sus exploradores, no hay poderes exagerado o cosas irreales entre las cosas que obtienen y me gusta la elección del autor en cuestiones como las características del estado, las habilidades, los niveles, etc.
Es un concepto muy prometedor en si me gastaría mas capítulos pero es cosa mia estoy acostumbrado a leer fanfic ya casi acabados con cientos de capítulos pero este fanfic esta muy bien pensado y si lo hacen bien puede ser muyyy bueno
Very good story but mc is an idiot the guy have power but don’t use them his meek and your are already in the 12 chapter but the mc do stupid decisions one after one I want to 🤯🤬 Man the story can be so much more but the mc I want to teleport in the story stop his invincible and slap him a dozen a time and tell man up and do something good for once like for real the guy can teleport in every place but when he go to the earth kingdom he go in abandoned street not in the palace to give himself a edge no he have to go where is alone to then be arrest and be treated like a criminal for a couple hours then go met the king but if he just teleport in the palace in front the king and use what all the people think already just say his a spirit and his the owner of the tour and say he come to the king tell him that the fire kingdom already use it and if he want to fight them at equal or even win again them just go to my tower and become stronger
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Very good to read, it brings peace at least to me, keep going author Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3Sn4K3
I really like the concept that this story introduces. It's got me hooked. A bit more time on writing quality would be appreciated though.
love the idea and i think u are doing great with it i would reccomend people to read it and see for themselves as for me im not really feeling i but i can still see its got potential
Снова МС идиот который не способен разобраться в начале истории. Серьезно, выбрать внешность или настроить уровни обучения башни, это так сложно? Только не говорите, что МС из США, и он не знает где находится Европа на карте мира.
I'm sorry, I just can't anymore. The Mc says he has played video games before, but when information starts popping up, he acts like a total noob. then, he is a total pushover, allowing people to dictate to him how he runs his tower, and he just sits there and takes it. I really love the Avatar series and Tower series, so I thought this was going to be good. this made me have to jump a few chapters ahead because of how the Mc was acting. when I go to the part where he was being interrogated by commander xhao and he was still a pushover I had to leave
I like the general plot, but I don't like the direction the story is taking. For me, the MC should be neutral, giving everyone the chance to become powerful without fear of reprisals.
Oh, good idea, stupid MC, it's ruined. In a tower or dungeon, do you make a law prohibiting killing or murdering? Isn't that what you put in the kindergarten, a black hole, meaning that out of every 100 people who enter there, at least 10 people die, 90 others get a reward. And then you go and invite someone to come there, as if it's a play city where anyone can come, wait, over time the crowd will come, when the news is out, you don't need to invite anyone. Then you go and talk to the people who came, how is it easier to leave the floor behind and talk to each other like friends? You're an idiot, you're the owner of the tower, not the tower guide, to behave like this. Now how does he behave after that? I couldn't bear to continue. (Google translation)
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THIS NOVEL KICKAZZ LOVES THE PLOT OF THE STORY..AUTHOR DO NOT FxUxCxK THIS UP AND QUIT WENT THE STORY GOT GOOD..PLEASE DO NOT DESTROY OUR DREAM AND FUN WITH BS...IF YOU QUIT I WILL NEVER READ ANOTHER OF YOUR WORKS AGAIN.