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摘要
An Airbender is a peaceful warrior. an Airbender does not kill. An Airbender witholds his wordly desire.
But he is a different Airbender, a man despite using the most peaceful element is the most brutal and scheming.
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Bad story in terms of keeping the reader involved in the "plot", in fact who is going to stop the reader from dropping the work before getting to where the author promised an improvement? It's the basics of the basics. However, I support the author not giving up on writing or even trying to make a good start for this ff, many loose ends and other things.
Story is amazing so far hope that stays that way at the moment he isn’t really the villain which I prefer but give the story a try
I know that it still has 3 chapters but that doesn't change the fact that it's good and has the potential to be the best fanfic of avatar as of now
remove the villain tag, he's not a villain at all because of your exchange I've read 20 chapters and there's no hint of a villain [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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amazing story. you should really try this. he's more like a dark hero rather than a real villain. i also dont like a villain mc where he will become enemy of the world. that's just pointless. this is different though, the mc really uses his brain well, a true mastermind. give it a try
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lol i just read it for the ruthless mc i dont have much to say its good nothing else
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This is my second review, the first one I deleted because after a while I thought it was hasty. After reading 18 chapters, you can see that the protagonist is pretty bad from a moral point of view, but then again, how bad he is is not clear, and who determines what is bad and what is good? Although I have new questions, I think that you just need to wait, unfortunately, or maybe fortunately, I don't understand what the main character is like in the first 5-10 chapters.
Yah aku menyukai novel ini, tolong perbanyak bab lagi😁 Aku hanya berharap MC dan korra meresmikan hubungan mereka ............... ..................................................................
Muito bom, está fazendo um ótimo trabalho, parabéns , continue por favor....................................................................................................................
Muito bom Impecável continue .......................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmgggfffffffcnbccxvcxf7rdhhddfbfhdhehegegedgrhdhfhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhfhdhfhdhfhfhdhfhdhfhfhfhfhfhfffffffhfdjgdfxhhgteedfgygggg
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I just writing this review because I have an idea about the title instead of being "The ruthless wind" that is bit generic and have a lack of creativity. You could have named the story with something in line with "hurricane" as it is a "ruthless" wind strong enough that destroy anything that get on its way.
I always read the first 5 chapters to write a review. Now, my thoughts are that I see some flaws. For example, why is he an airbending master? Why does nobody care that he's an airbending master? Seriously, an airbending master appears and nobody wonders where he came from? All he does is say 'come, I'll train you' without any questions. Also, it seems like the story is following the script of the entire series step by step for now. Well, that could change; I only read the first 5. The main character is just a spectator; he doesn't change the events. Hmm, I don't know what good thing to say.