/ Anime & Comics / Aura recovery in the comprehensive World : Beginning is Herrscher
摘要
Well at first when I saw the beautiful loli with black hair and black eyes in my childhood I thought this was the realm of Strike the Blood …
Years passed and I began to read books to discover a story about the three brave men and their defeat of the Demon King. Under inquiry, I hear about a house among the nobles called Kagino. ...
It's alright so far... I also saw the beautiful young lady of the Shinomiya clan...
It's alright so far
There is also a cooking school whose name I don't remember
After I grew up, I began to watch TV to understand that I was in a kingdom called Inazuma, and its ruler was Raiden Chen
Well that's too much Then I heard about the Yun clan in the next street… well there is a boy named Yun Che as I was afraid~~
It is impossible for the combat power ceiling to rise several times suddenly, right?
By the way, in the neighboring Lyue, there is a small clan named Xiao, there is a genius named Xiao Yan and his childhood sweetheart Xiao Lingzhi, and next to them is a clan called Xia, with a beautiful young lady named Xia Chenyou.
Oh, there is a small clan called the Lin clan and its young master, Lin Langtian, who crippled someone from the branch clan.
Ah, there is a yokai called General the Dog who married a human named Izayoi and their son Inuyasha...
By the way, there is also the fire village of Konoha on the outskirts of the kingdom
Well this is just a mess As you see the world in this universal world are [ genshin Impact, Strike the Blood, Primal Chaos, Kaguya-sama, Martial Universe (WDQK), Battle Across the Sky (Btth), Inuyasha, There is a trouble with My Youth, Naruto , honkai 3 , high school dxd ( little )]
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By the way... no harem ah that's just a heartache...there is one love...well to tell the truth it is two in one....well you may not understand , right ?
Well let's leave it as a surprise... although some have already guessed the meaning Hmm ok there will probably be 2 female leads with the main character
... maybe~ ok let's settle it when the time comes
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well I don't want to be harsh with the review, but the storyflow is a mess. The character development, and the grammar are also a mess. it's like I'm reading a MTL Chinese novelI think it's great that you are trying to incorporate all these verses, but the execution is bad.overall i think you should paraphrase the chapters first, you can simplify this by using AI software and edit the result from the software. Also, try to reduce the amount of characters that are introduced so you can have an easier time to manage flow and interaction between characters in the story.