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Attack On Titan: Ackerman's Legacy

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作者: O_Tamashi

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Our Comrades ' deaths will never be in vain

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AnAmalgam0fEmotion

This Is going to my first review so I hope I don’t offend anyone. The Story itself from the first 9 chapters is well paced in my opinion. The update it is receiving is consistent. Although the design of the mc is very short in description from what I read (I could have skimmed a bit or read too fast, so sorry), it is only the beginning so I have hopes it can improve. I don’t have much to say on the background of the story as it is only the beginning so I apologize. The development of the story is very understandable and not very difficult to get lost in. Lastly is the writing quality. The paragraphs are all jumbled into one so it is difficult to find the spot where you left, so it can be a bit frustrating. A tip for the author (you don’t have to apply it if you don’t want to) is to space out each paragraphs so the readers can have a moment to breathe and take in the story. Overall that is my review of this novel and I hope to see it improve and implement some of my tips if they want to. Again this is my first review so I hope my words didn’t come out as rude, Thank you for reading my review and have a great day.

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OMAR_ZOAIR

pretty amazing story, doesn't interfere much with the main storyline, unlike a lot of fan-made novels, the main character is a little cool but his emotions are being kept bottled, i like the story so far [img=coins]

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DaoistvjcKaB

the main character is great, and his ties to levi ackerman and his relationship is unique, like a brother relationship, the story is getting a little into the main story as it seems Roku the main character is getting memories or flashbacks related to the rumbling, maybe it was sent to him by eren or something, the pacing of the story is great so far

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