/ Anime & Comics / ATLA: Mael, child of the sun
摘要
A man who is hit by a truck meets rob and is given 5 wishes. Choosing the appearance of Mael from the seven deadly sins as well as fire related powers, watch as he grows from starting in the fire nation and stopping the war with the help of the avatar and an odd extra.
Author here I’ll try do a chapter every Monday to Friday and then edit them on Saturday or Sunday
Also inform my dyslexic ass of spelling mistakes as I most likely won’t recognise some
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
great work.........................................................................................................................................
I would definitely suggest the use of a writing assistant tool such as Grammarly to improve the attention to grammar in this story
I would like to say this is a short but good novel because it's overpowered bugs in it in a good way but the artist stop updating
I accidentally made Azula and Zuko twins. Just imagine it as a AU universe or something since in the original she’s two years younger