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章節 23: Problems

From all the reviews till now. I have understood some things that the audience doesn't like.

1. His desperation for females:  I understand this. I do. I won't rewrite this but I will not repeat this again.

2. Not using his cheats fully: Wait for the upcoming chapters and you won't say the same.

3. MC not eating meat: I understand your points of this being a cultivation world and yada yada.

Tell me one thing. Why do cultivators eat beast meat? Why? Got any answers? Let me tell you, it's to make their physiques stronger. But does my MC needs that? NOOO!! He's fucking invincible in the same realm. Has a fucking book with overpowered cultivation techniques and much more. So why the fuck would he eat them? 

The only way he would be consuming them is gonna be in the form of pills. It will be done when necessary.

4. MC not killing beasts for money: I admit this was a mistake. Will change his mindset regarding this in future as he will need to kill beasts for the alchemy material. And it would seem hypocritical at that time if he still clings to this.

5. MC not killing beasts to increase his shadow army: A baseless accusation. I never ever said anything like that. 

If you got any more problems then write in the comments


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