/ Fantasy / Asteria:into the land of Zoa
摘要
Experience thrilling action and adventure in this book.
After traveling back to his father's hometown to find out hidden details about his life that will help him find out solution to the source of all the weird and strange scenarios he encountered from childhood including scary nightmares which almost made him mad, Francis Jones unravels a deep mystery about his father and himself when he met Zari who came from the land of Wintera, a city from another dimension called Asteria, and one of the Council members from the Wol tribe, whom his father truly came from.
Zari told him who his father truly is and requested that Francis should come back with her to Wintera in order to get the remaining clues, that was implanted in his head by his father, to find the lost sword of Zoa that will help them defeat the evil Lord Vedon, the leader of the Zek tribe, which he did agree to.
Meanwhile, another creature from the realm paid a visit to Jane and also requested her to follow him back to the land of Tyron where she was truly given birth to. Although she found it difficult to believe, she still complied with the request.
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I enjoyed reading this book a lot. Haven't gotten that far but from what I can tell it's really going to get better the more I read. There were a few spelling errors here and there but so far it was a good read for me! Keep it up!
For me, the characterization of this story greatly outmatched other quality in this book though there's much to improve on regarding the writing quality but still it is a wonderful story. I love it
The world building is good here. The writing is decent but there are some grammatical choices that are a bit confusing. The updates are consistent. The story develops well, and a lot of the characters have cool names. One thing I'd like to see more is visual description of what characters and the environment look like. This story is an interesting tale all-in-all that I think readers can take a lot away from. To the author: I welcome you to explore and add a review to my story "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" (AMJ). You may want to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ to not feel totally lost. Cheers
I am surprised that no one had reviewed this book. It had a good story and the pace was okay. currently at chapter 7 I see that there is something going on with the plot. Here is my take about the story and its quality. The story and the world building is good. The alternate between the other world and the human world was done in a good transition. The quality of writing is also good. That concludes my review.Thank you!
It is really a great story though every story has its strength and weaknesses and I sincerely believe the dynamics of this book is in fact thrilling to explore